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Voted For: Street Disciple
Street Disciple: Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap no, wack Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold played, wack Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet played as fuck, wack You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed nooooo This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer no...... NotoriousM: Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen... Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... wack Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... no Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... no diss whatsoever Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... wtf? no Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... played as fuck, and wack Overall vote- This was shit battle...Notorious had no punches and was overall wack...almost all of SD's lines were played, or either wack as hell...still better than NM tho...so vote-Street D |
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Voted For: Street Disciple
Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen... Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green... Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate... Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate... Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes... Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws... you have a basic flow some good rhymes and a decent apporuch but you need to get more raw like you need to attack more i think befor we can concider you part of this crew you not far but still need a bit of training and i think by battle more cats you will get what im saying to you now, decent try but attack your opponit more and diss your oppanit more nice try Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer i felt like you attack more at your oppnit some was basic some was ok noting good you need to attack your opponit more and get more concepts going cause all of them was either old or recycled concepts good try but i think you won this battle take this battle as a exsample of why you need to attack more because you never know how much your opponit is going to attack and not just flow you see there is a difference and that has alot to do when someone picks who wins you wanna pick who is attack more with original concepts and not just flowing thats why i think you won |
Voted For: NotoriousM
nicce.. best line-Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords... I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword... worst line-Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times... Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple... overall-great puches, rhymes well vote- NotoriousM |
Voted For: Street Disciple
lol SD handed No his ass on this one... No just didn't come hard enough... looks like he took SD too lightly... *shruggs* Opener: SD Closer: SD Punches: SD Personals: NotoriousM Creativity: SD Complexity: SM Enjoyment: SM Vote: SM |
Voted For: Street Disciple
oh......street u won this one eazy better rymes and flow and structure notor u rymes could b better i seen way better from ya but nite wasnt ur nite so vote for street no hate notor u did good and u street rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...645242&posted=1 |
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