^^^ayo man u didnt say anythin to do wit me :(...

Intermental:

Your verse was a little better lyrical wise, but still not great. Flow was kinda iffy in some spots...Quality was decent. Really was not one of your best tracks man.

RTF on Questions.

Umm Yeah...


...Fuck Jessicas Intro Word


Its Koo

Cmp-Good Flow

Deliverys Koo

Presence Is Nice

Lyrcis A lil Meh

Inter:

Proly The Best

Delivery-Dope

Emotions-Ok

Flows-Good But A lil Off In Spots

Lyrics Are Better

Overall:6/10


Not ya Best Still Aight

aite...............thanks.......

u stole my chipmunk to sing the beginning of the track!

Did you pay him?


1st dude hit the mic while recording....

beat is ok

flow is pretty decent


vocals need to be amped though
yizzer


Inter...u came in way to languid...up that emotion on the 1st few lines...hook the listener in

ur lyrics were pretty cool

I like how u did some of ur dubs


ur delivery was monotonous at spots

decent track that's promising


1

^^LOL..thank u i guess..........

-listening

Intro koo i like her voice for some reason;)
good intro nothing ammusing but kool.

2nd verse- flow was on point lyriks was straight on beat nothing really ammusing,
3-rd-nice lyriks on beat nothing ammusing but good shit,some lines had me like (mm iight) but chea man this drop was hot

keep dropping hot thist man intermantal man u starting to sound nice homie keep it up yo
(nice beat by the way)
7.5/10
RTF ~1`

Intro - wuz aiite didn't really feel her voice that much but fit the concept of the song....

1st MC and hook- wasn't feelin his style at all, felt like the delivery could've been better, lyrics could've been upped....

Int. - nice verse, ya elevated from your earlier tracks this year....nice delivery and stayed on topic....

Overall - decent track and quality wuz strate.......

pz

~1~

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435

intro - good singin

1st verse - sounds koo. flow iz aight. voice iz aight.

2nd verse - u sound soooo much younger then u look, lol. good lyrics. good flow.

this track wuz koo. nice beat too.

rtf pleeze

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548

werd