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Oh look, im not allowed to edit so I cant. haha. Mystic, can you change the yellow to a readable text for the dyslexic please?
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*yawn* i told him not to so he jsut left lol good luck on that feed
UR A DICK sincerely THE BLIND DYSLEXIC BITCH :cussing: |
rofl.... Love you Amanda.
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Yours was pretty good too, cept its a little unfair...
...cause you have a duckling army prolly forcing ppl to vote for you guys. :( |
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I voted on Le vs pathom this (and partners) :)
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^ Meh...
...we already got more than 3, lol. *High-5's all around* |
I love all the votes we are getting. its fucking dope. -_-
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3 links per member not team you half asser
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^ Theres only 3 battles up including our own you non-forum-looker...
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rofl^
we owned the owner of the tourny. :) |
^ lol.
He called me a half-asser, which just compliments my alright known title. He knows I still heart him. ;) ...but I HATE, baseball cards!!!!!!! |
A'ight this was a good battle...
But damn...Spek and YSdat captured all my attention with their verses...amazing and vivid imagery mixed with a little bit of storytelling. Dope shit dope shit. Mentalz and Lola Cruez...good verses, but I thought you both jus lacked the creativity in this. Good drop though. Vote- Spek and Ysdat |
Let me start off by saying... Good shit all of you..
Spek and Y's Spek your piece had very nice imagery too it.. this made it a very fun to read piece. I feel as if some of your rhymes may have been forced, but it wasnt too bad. Your lines were on point for most part... a little stretched here and there. The thing I liked most about your part was the imagery and emotion. That 8 line spoken words section was very creative. Ysdat. your piece had very good imagery from beginning to end. I had a mental picture the whole way through. Your emotion made this piece very deep in the way went on about it. Your lines also were on point, a few strectched but nothing too long. Only thing i would like to see more from you is punctuation. Your piece has barely any punct. which made it all run together. Otherwise very nice piece. Mentals and Lola Cruez Your pieces were very descriptive and very creative. The story line from two different sides of 1 subject is very clever. You both had wonderful imagery and vocab. I felt more emotion from Lola's piece, but then again, the way you both used the topic, its kinda hard not to be emotional. Your lines were practically perfect the whole way through. Nothing strectched, mostly all same length and flowed well. My favorite part of the piece was the verses themselves how they played as a story and visual of two peoples lives. Very nice drop. I am going to have to give the vote to mentalz and lola for being so creative and being a little more emotional. Their pieces were just more interesting and fun to read. Therefore getting my vote. \v/ - Mentalz and Lola Cruez. - no hate... pz |
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