This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

checkin the polls on this biiiiotch............................

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Voted For: Paranoid

yo son, your verse had that illy shit, crazy beat and all that, I was dayyyyyyyyyyyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuumm, I was like, hot beat, wow, and stuff, and the lyrics was all like, pow! Not a gun pow, but like a little kid with an imaginary gun pow! And shit, the punches were like, cheese on a lobster, they went so well with the verse and stuff. Multi's, well you had none. But your verse was more hip then Ophra Winfrey son, and more gangster then Bill Clinton with a cap on backwards, props sonny.

Uh, UNF, UNLOSE, hahahahahhaha, mad wordplay sons, and daughter, word, why do people say son? Ima say duaghter from now on, shit is more ill, anyways daughter, uh, your punches were cool and stuff, but quality was, meh, and that wasn't cool, so werd

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Voted For: B.Daniel

explatnation....

para = garbage...wack lyrics..WAYY MONATONE all the way through..NO emotion BADDD adlibs..was to loud n lame..lyrics was decent at best.....and u got BALLS to try to spit on that beat....

UNF had pritty nice lyrics and his flow was on..emotion was good...he jus wanted this way more..and it shows blatently

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ROFL...wtf..u gota b joking man...not that u voted for him but HOW u word ur shit...and how could u think he that nice?? u know thats one of his boys...or maby his moma behing that wack ass S/N LOLOL

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Voted For: B.Daniel

Goes to B in my opinion...

Paranoid: bad beat choice, for battle you gotta get something grimey, something gully. If you choose a beat like this one, you gotta have damn strong presence to pull it off but that wasn't the case with you. I even got the feeling like you were bored with the entire thing. I didn't feel any anger or any desire to win and rip. Your presence on the mic didn't correspond to your lyrics which were good, nice punches but your delivery didn't support those lyrics.

UNF: flow was kinda off here and there but not on a lot of spots though. Just like in some places, syllables didn't come out nicely but I only noticed that the second time I listened so no biggie whatsoever. Good beat choice and nice delivery, I can sense your eager to win and rip him apart. Lyrics could be turned up a notch here and there but your mic presence made up for that.

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Voted For: Paranoid

A'ight...

This was a good battle. Both of you are pretty even with the flow and whatnot...but I really wont get into that. This is about punches...

Paranoid...he came with some witty punches...good shit.

UNF...Came with some good ones, but other ones were lame...sorry but you lost this...

My vote goes to Paranoid, but this was a good battle.
Keep it up, both of you.

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Voted For: B.Daniel

v/B/daniel

I think he ran away with this battle. Cuz he actually had some punches his flow was on point and presence was well felt. Paranoid could ahve potenially won the battle but he just needed to include some punches unless i didnt hear them, but still theink that my vote should go to B.daniel.

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Voted For: B.Daniel

vote...b daniel
b daniel-flow was koo,fell off a few times,delivery was nice seemed a lil forced once or twice,emotion was better than p's but punches were average in yours

paranoid-flow was not good,all choppy and shit,delivery wasnt good,didnt like the beat as it didnt seem like a battle beat,the punches were better than b.dan's but i think he got you as he had better flow,delivery and emotion

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ROFL@Para Being A Pussy And Dqing Votes ...........................

Voted For: Paranoid

UNF
I turned your diss on and all i got for a image on your diss was that you like it when he sits in the sitting position, like man half of your rhymes didn't make sense. no logic wordplay and the voice kill it, it sounds fake but ima give you prosp for havin decent quality and a beat. but that means nothin without having a great diss. your voice is just young.

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Paranoid
not bad I like your quality beat was gross but the disses were better not like great or anything but you had more logic wordplay and personals. the ecko is dope with the headphones man. flow and delivery is pretty good for you, better then unf but really you have improved with that and shit. so overall ima vote you for coming harder with the diss.

v/Para

Voted For: Paranoid

Para

i HATE this beat You sound liek kool col-b, who also rapped over this identical beat. Your flow is WAY off, even 'texty' and your adlibs shouldn't be the same volume as your verse since it distracts from it tremendously. The punches were ehh ok. Nothing that had me like "oh shit son!" and this is coming from someone that already dissed UNF. You gotta start writing over a beat, because I can tell form a far distance that this wasn't written to a beat just by the way the lines end. realistically though, if it were written dead on to this beat it'd feel exactly liek the track colby made. As a diss, it's not that strong as far as the delivery seeing thta the flow was off, but your cadence is in all the right places and the punches were mild. Ditch the one sylable rhyme scheme because that shit went out in 1989. Lets see what UNF brought. Oh BTW, you had way too much echo on your vocals for a track liek this.


UNF, the beat's bretty nice. Got a big-beats, stompy feel to it, which makes your horrible ass mic/EQing sound even worse. I personally hate your voice since it soudns so high pitched, and your adlibs are too loud. they shoudl be quieter than your vocals since you're usually shouting or some shit liek that. Spekaing of high pitched, that high-pitched voice you used half way is straight outta 2003. People stopped that a long time ago. But you needed to add WAY more lines to this because the punches didn't hit like I'd expect em to or that they should for a beat like this. You didn't really diss him except for that 50¢ line which in it self wasn't strong enough to tilt this your way.

Vote: Paranoid.

holy shit apexx I totally agree with you man. though you really critized me and shit thanks, ima keep that ecko and shit in mind. the one syllable rhyme yea I can do multiples:)

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