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Nice Siggy There :)

;l.///......I Cant Stand fuckin Slow ass Battles

This was feedback posted for Daubs

checkin' Pollz.. Daubs wins.

Should have voted !! lol.

Up......................

They scared that if they vote against you your not gonna be their friend anymore

UPpin

what you on about?

I owned you.

Keep chattin and we can make it more serious.

Damn Calm Downn I Was J/k

But Im very curious to find out What you mean by "more serious"

pinkslips :)......................................

Voted For: Daubs

Aimez:

Look Yo I'll take Yo Life and put it on display like a Prized Trophie
Daubs is a "Crackhead Gangsta" That's why they call him a "Dope G"
^^alright meta ok punch 6/10
Daub plays to much backline and left His entire crew Defenseless
Now im takin out yo "Frontline" and left Yo "Top" Niggaz "Toothless"
^^defenseless and toothless dont rhyme they just end the same 2/10
Takin a Dick Withouth The Vasoline was The only Time You Was Tight
He Likes The Left Hand and fingers Thats Why He Just Cant Get Right
^^played concept, i hate that left/right shit 1/10
Stop Daubney before she solves my case...Ha man i'll Smack Scooby doo
Shoot Freddy, Kill Velma and put three holes in shaggy's head Too.
^^ehh ok 3/10
Try droppin a verse dauby even with "El El" He still aint "Twice The Man"
Your Like The IRS Bill collector No one wants to hear what You're Sayin
^^doesnt rhyme, stick to topicals 3/10

Overall: 15/50 (30%)

Daubs:

Aim to do well, thats not what you be mate
cos aimez so far off..he ended up with PSA
^^ehh ok meta decent opener 5/10
Aimez? you aint even hittin targets you wanker
but targets in your lungs, wanna die...you cancer
^^decent meta didnt like the setup 4/10
my wordplay can be weak against you
cause my weak bars still own your best dude
^^no 1/10
Shite punches and wordplay, now you cant flow too
id say its a shame, but the words even ashaimed to know you
^^ehh 3/10
weak verse but my closer will hurt, youll have to fight me to stop
cause i just fuckin stormed you off....weather you like it or not
^^good meta ok closer 5/10

Overall: 18/50 (36%)

Vote: Daubs

Close battle though

Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig plz

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Voted For: Daubs

Look Yo I'll take Yo Life and put it on display like a Prized Trophie
Daubs is a "Crackhead Gangsta" That's why they call him a "Dope G
Takin a Dick Withouth The Vasoline was The only Time You Was Tight
He Likes The Left Hand and fingers Thats Why He Just Cant Get Right

Vs

Aim to do well, thats not what you be mate
cos aimez so far off..he ended up with PSA
Shite punches and wordplay, now you cant flow too
id say its a shame, but the words even ashaimed to know you
weak verse but my closer will hurt, youll have to fight me to stop
cause i just fuckin stormed you off....weather you like it or not

V.Daubs.

He just came a little more consistent.

Aimez- dont "do this" it looks newbish.

But yeh, V.Daubs for consistency.

Hit the battle in my sig please?

Voted For: Daubs

Look Yo I'll take Yo Life and put it on display like a Prized Trophie
Daubs is a "Crackhead Gangsta" That's why they call him a "Dope G"
^rofl, life as a trophy? that's a good thing, 1/10
Daub plays to much backline and left His entire crew Defenseless
Now im takin out yo "Frontline" and left Yo "Top" Niggaz "Toothless"
^this was a sad, sad attempt, and you're not black 1/10
Takin a Dick Withouth The Vasoline was The only Time You Was Tight
He Likes The Left Hand and fingers Thats Why He Just Cant Get Right
^first line doesn't make sense, and it was aight attempt at a punch 3/10
Stop Daubney before she solves my case...Ha man i'll Smack Scooby doo
Shoot Freddy, Kill Velma and put three holes in shaggy's head Too.
^this was fucking just stupid 0/10
Try droppin a verse dauby even with "El El" He still aint "Twice The Man"
Your Like The IRS Bill collector No one wants to hear what You're Sayin
^nope, and it doesn't even rhyme that well, 1/10

overall: 6/50...uhm, explore more concepts, and evolve your punches to actually take a shot at the person, if this was real...you'd fight like a girl -__-.....no hate

Aim to do well, thats not what you be mate
cos aimez so far off..he ended up with PSA
^meh 4/10
Aimez? you aint even hittin targets you wanker
but targets in your lungs, wanna die...you cancer
^just didn't really seem like it fit 2/10
my wordplay can be weak against you
cause my weak bars still own your best dude
^played 2/10
Shite punches and wordplay, now you cant flow too
id say its a shame, but the words even ashaimed to know you
^i laughed, but wording was a little eh 4/10
weak verse but my closer will hurt, youll have to fight me to stop
cause i just fuckin stormed you off....weather you like it or not
^nice word play, good ending 7/10

overall: 19/50...definately not your best, but it wasn't needed; your closer was enough, and ultimately, it looks like the only one you really tried on...nice battle, keep up to both, daubs has this easy

v/Daubs

This was feedback posted for Daubs

I guess I gotta give this to daub's. He actually rhymed. lol. I dunno. not much to quote here, let's just go with the fact that Daubs wasnt as bad as Aimez. nothing impressive here tho. My Vote. Daubs.

But don't worry. I can't vote yet. ;)

Voted For: Aimez

Aimez got this....although he came weak and he's dropped so much better than this. his rhymes fell off at places but he did have better hits than daubs. Daubs, i know you can write better than that.