upppppppppppppppp

*listenin*

inter - good flow here man, presense not great but quality and lyrics are straight kid, nice verse

hook - pretty decent and catchy just not mad on this beat

ojay - don't know you are, beta presense and flow is straight but lyrics ain't great

'okay okay' overall pretty decent, keep em comin

rtf on this please:-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216876

pz

thanks fo the feed i got ure feed now........

upppin...............

Lol, you not whispering on here!! lol, I'm just fucking with you man.

Flow was consistent, lyrically you were good. Delivery is okay - could be upped a little more as far as enotion and the way it's portrayed on the mic. Other than that this is probably the best I've heard from you.


O-Jay - flow was strong, nice lil NY style kinda reminds me of me about 2 years ago alot of flow not much substance. Remember that people still listen to you lyrically. Towards the end you picked it up a bit. But, other than that you're solid as well.

LOL thanks fo the feed dawg.......

beat is ALRIGHT
Nothin spectacular

intermental's verse
hmm, it sounds kinda like you whisper.
your flow is stalky, its not smooth enough, it could be alot smoother
also, when you do the chorus and you say "ITS.TIME.TO.BLOW.
Its kinda stalky..or choppy,
Ojay, likin his voice, no homo. he has more confidence
his flow is also smoother, ALOT better than Intermentals.
he also says the chorus better
intermenta;s verse again
flow is choppy as fuck
like after you say "diamond in the rough"
it kinda like where you start to fuck up
now, Intermental's chours, it sounds WAAY more smooth now :-\

hmm, overall, this was an aiigh track, but it would've been GOOD, if Intermentals was a bit more amp'd, and flowed better.
Ojay really outshined in this track
its all good
keep elevatin
pZ

thanks imma work on the flow