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lol wow thank deph and spek lol : /
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alright yea i can peep that when i get home from school tommorow my apolagies q
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beats nice
ysdat first qualitys not too good lol lyrics are funny lmao :) deliverys not too good but is that cause u drunk? lol emotions not bad lol@the porn adlibs willa flows nice lyrics Mmmm;) deliverys koo emotions not bad ROFLLL LMAO prensec is ok overall :8/10 koo track;) rtf in my mother gooese track |
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alright q and unf i rtf :)
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listenin...oh I love this beat...ysdat...ure vocals are lil low....u english?...lmao at the screamin in the back...quality is not good....flow is meh...on and off alot....lyrics are pretty sick lol literary..fo a drunk freestyle its pretty good..now wil a peer comes on...u sound like sum ghetto hoochie wit these lyrics lol...."fuck me"" damn rv has now turned into a porno..damn....lyrics are nizzasty...but flow is ok...voice is like a porno..this is a porno track lol 1
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yea i know it is lol but its unique rv has never done this lol
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LOL - is that willa in the background of ysdat's verse? hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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lol @ that being a "verse" yeh it is, I hid the mic under the bed and yeh
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ok ysdat....your quality was ass....I could barely make out ya words an that female sound effect of the chick moanign was dominating ya vocals as well making it even harder to hear what u said....ya flow wasn't bad jus lacked creativity..u took real simplistic approach..delivery cant judege couldn't make ya voice out too well...willa...u improving ma'....ya delivery was most animated I ever heard it...only thing was it didn't mesh wit this beat..u spit wit a club type delivery on a laidback sexy track....the punched in phrases like "pull ym hair" was a nice touch but again it was delivered wrong....it came across almost as if u was talking about it in a comical way instead of a sexy way....flow was koo but like ysdat lacked creativity but all in all good track...jus quality issues an emcee kill polishing needed which will both come in time...stay up....1
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ysdat: I couldn't understand most of what you were saying. momotone and the quality is bad. flow I couldnt tell nore delivery couldnt understand you. nothin else to say cuz you didnt show up man. willa vocals are a lil to high, this is the type of track to be layed back and you put a lil to much emotion into it. your lyrics were a lil weak. flow was off in some spots but it was decent in others. delivery was a bit off as well. but overall I'd say this trak is aight but could use more work.
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