kid your rhyming was wack on this. your disses, weren't hitting anyone, and your whole shot at lexi.....was gone with the wind. up your shit then diss peeps

Shit Off The Hook Dude

its makes no sense, learn to make sense,then focus on rhyming.

cats talk but can't top this rhyming of superior quality hell yall go to school please

lol, hey let's battle homie, see if you can top my shit, since you talk big

dont waste your time he specializes in ducking i called him out like a month ago he's to pussy

lol , he's faggot........fag, fag, fag, fag, fag! *The Crowd Goes Wild While Yellin It Out Loud*

thais cat make and audio and still got nuked that's a new level all together

lumberjack you suck dont deny it if you actually had confidence and thought you were good you'd battle me

hel just proved that when i whopp your ass come on smell the coffee it boiling

OK i'm gonna up the stakes on this battle if you win you can have all of my RV money but if you cheat to get votes you will get banned

This was kinda wack, to be honest. U had a lot of played rhymes, some basic shit. I didnt see anythin innovative in there. U should work on ur metaphors and punches so that u can construct creative and productive wordplay, cause thats what makes diss tracks hot. Also, try to make ur structure balance ur verse, so that ur lines coincide with each other well. It will enable u to utilize punches easier. Keep workin

~ UD

none of these rhymes are played come on underdog you a whack fuck to even say that plus you haven't posted shit let me see what your talk too much ass got and don't bite off my shit come with your own shit like I did son

U dumb or just blind? Look at ur rhymes.. they were cool in the 90's.. now they're not...

Examples: "...knock you out... no doubt...", "...truth... roof... proof...", "be.. G" lmfao son u wack



Im waitin to drop until I can provide links to my feedback... read the rules of this shit mothafucka



lol.. i been rappin for a long time.. have no need to bite

I'll drop somethin soon and rip u apart, so hold onto ur panties until then, wack fool

~ UD