Voted For: Young Un...

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the fuck is evry1 oin that upping

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Young's verse was full of good multies and some dope word play, but your lines were too stretched. i was feeling X's verse better it had harder punches strtucutre was better and
not to mention shorter lines.young yo punches aint hit so hard. v/ X.cellent

Voted For: Young Un...

Young Un


Have U Layed-Down-To-Rest My Game-Is-The-Best Ur Life Gets Slated-With-Techs..
And I Hope U Have 'Wesley Snipes In Ya Heart' Cause Imma Put A 'Blade'-In-Ya-Chest..!!

Nice line......................................Not da best but nice

Im Impailing-The-Fifth..Roam The Streets With The Mac-And-The-Inf..Rap-Up-This-Shit..
I Aint Into 'Scary Movies' Dawg So I Heard Enough Tales-From-This-Crypt (Crip)..!!

Nice line.............brought back memories but the multies are killin it

I Onli Play-With-This-Text..Allow Me Just To Say Whos-The-Best..Im The Greatest-No-Stress..


Nice glorification multie

And Wen Im Spraying-The-Tech I'll Leave A 'Shell In Ya Ass' Like U Laying-An-Egg..!!


kinda funny but i didnt see a rhyme and it definetly didnt rhyme wit da next line


Just Take This Loss-Kid My Guns 'Spray' Like A-Faucet Im Ill I Don’t Force-It..Not-Often..


Nice multie and slight use of word play

U Distraught-Bitch..How Is U Gangsta Wen U Stay On The 'Net Longer' Than A Caught-Fish..!!
Xcelent U Shuld Pick-Ya-Casket This Shit-Is-Drastic Distraught-Action Wen U Rapped-In-Plastic..


nice punch.............definetly feelin da first line


Convict-This-Bastard..N 'Pierce Ya Chest' Like Wearin Paul's-Jersey-Backwords


Again with multies. You hittin on point wit em



X.celent


My rhymes are drastic , your punches are fake like Plastic
Some1 said your audio was dope and u knew he was sarcastic(his sig)

Medicore but a good personal

This dude has no brains and hes losing like a retard playing chess
And your rhymes are like your verse , long and just plain pointless

Punch seems forced....i do it at times too

Im not on your level ha your funny but i guess its kinda true
Only if u warnt counting the 8658890 people that are above you

Not feeling this line all too good....aint hittin hard

Your wack you were good bck in the day its time to fucking retire
And its like Cs is like your verse the way theyre already expired

seems like a filler but still not feelin this line....aint hittin hard

Your not sick and any who beleives it is a stupid ignorant fool
Cuz your faking ta sickness like a kid who dont wanna go 2 school

nice concept just bad follow through....


Final Opinion-Young Un had some nice punches that were pulled threw by some good use of multies which i believed won it for him and he kept it on a constant level. X.celent has some good personals but the punches wasn't hitting hard which i thought was his downfall

Advice- Keep elevatin Young Un keep doing your thang and dont let advice and complements stop you from bettering yourself. X.celent keep elevating like us all and work on ya punches I guess..Good job to the both of you


Final Judgement- Young Un V/





P.S. RTF by voting on my battle link in my sig with Apostrophe. The battle is in need of votes.

Voted For: Young Un...

this was a good battle over u both came out nice but x celent to me u were jus a lil off.....i mean ya verse was kinda soft. i liked ur punchlines thought they were more agressive towards ur oppent i vote 4 young un.....