Voted For: sabre
voted sabre:
verse was active, had all the elements...the flow was not top notch but it existed, punches were the stronger portion of the verse, the key was aight...had a couple multis. if none or any advice would be given, yo punches were aight...just liven em up wit a multi or somthin. good read.
unfortunately Technique i didnt enjoy yo verse as much, you had some strong points, personals none the less...i wasnt your failure to pull harder punches, that you did not lack, you just didnt come wit an edge...no originality, no style. but hey its only text. ill be lookin out for more or yo verses.
vote: Saber
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