Good piece guys. Let the votes commense. If anyone views this..

*waits for 3 weeks to go by and have 2 votes*

Yeah i feel what your saying there....


*Crosses fingers and pm's old participants vote*

Fuck all of you. That is all.

Good drop for you too.

Rev and DQ, wtf at your versenot making any sense to me. I was waiting for a twist, but you trailed off to a guy falling into a room and getting his pay check?
If im wrong please correct me. :)

You two dropped weak,seriously. Alot of lines began with I or small words, you two should know by now,start lines with verbs or adverbs and it creates alot more imagery.
Your vocab is weak, I feel you two just threw this together for the sake of dropping.
Hope i dont offend you fam. Just speaking what i thought while reading it.
but damn, this is no were near your usual level.

vote - suspicious and fathom this

That was the twist. It was spose to seem like he was going to jump off a cliff or something, but instead went in for a promotion. Metas.

but it didnt link up well, you didnt hint it thru out,in one bar he went from jumping off the cliff to opening a door, you didnt play it out properly.
it hit to sudden with not enough imagery.

Thanks... Up this


1-0 in our favor.

closed those two win remove this tounry congrats

C'mon ysdat.... and every1....



This cant be closed off of a 1 vote decision.... Dont even feel like a good win.... lets see if I can get some ex-participants to vote

Ya, at least 2 more votes saying we lost would be nice.

^ lol.. not like that.. we could use a good break down....


We know hades wont vote and most of the others.. Hades wont because he feels he got cheated..... lil' bastard.....

Omfg, vote dammit!

We've Waited Long Enough

Fathom This And Suspicious Win

Closed Bitches.