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Fuck You Sean 01-10-06 04:12 PM

Lmfao

.:Mike Check:. 01-10-06 04:55 PM

Idk how i got that vote, if you look at that one time i posted i even admitted that i knew i lost, idk how i got it...anyway, uppin for this

GKillaz05 01-10-06 09:03 PM

Sorry that I made a mistake and put 30 instead of 50. Fuck people need to learn the shut up when shit dont go there own way. Fuck if im sooo wrong, then you will have nothin' to worry about. Just D/R 5 Votes.

.:Mike Check:. 01-15-06 12:07 PM

uppin for votes on this right here, come on lets close this battle

.:Mike Check:. 01-17-06 05:37 PM

uppin............................................. ....VOTE DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!

Willa 01-17-06 06:33 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ok i dotn really feel like explaining it
this was jsut an unfaior match up obviously
u had better punches and wordplay both had good structure and flow

p4ntzistheish 01-17-06 11:04 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
Sorry that I made a mistake and put 30 instead of 50. Fuck people need to learn the shut up when shit dont go there own way. Fuck if im sooo wrong, then you will have nothin' to worry about. Just D/R 5 Votes.



Who says I care who wins this.

.:Mike Check:. 01-18-06 09:36 AM

uppin on this.............................................. ...

-Substance- 01-18-06 04:44 PM

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 
Can't Vote Cause I Had To Restart My Damn Post Count, But I Think This Was A Real Good Battle, Both Came Nice, But IMO One Step Just Came Six Steps Ahead....Nice Job.

.:Mike Check:. 01-19-06 06:12 PM

Uppppppiiiiinnnnngggg for votes on this, c'mon lets close this damn battle, its been goin on too long

.:Mike Check:. 01-20-06 09:40 AM

uppin for votes on this...cmon close this right here

.:Mike Check:. 01-20-06 07:05 PM

Uppity up up uppin for votes on this..............

Kirk 02-04-06 03:33 PM

upping and stuff..................................

Adam 02-04-06 03:42 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond
This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
Nice nameplay..
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
Dopeness..
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
Dope..
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Bambi is cool shit..
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*
Nice wordplay..

vs.

Tha 1 An Onlii B
Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
Meh, pretty played on OSB..
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
Whack...
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
Bad flow/stupid punch..
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
Not Feelin..
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"***
Weak wordplay... yes I get it, the game Clue...it was still whack..

Vote: OneStepBeyond

Thought he came with witty wordplay, good flow and harder punches...

H.D. 02-08-06 05:22 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Opener: 1 step (The name play personal on the double I took it)
Closer: 1 step (Onlii's closer line was hella stretched litterally and creatively... 1 Step's was just harder hitting and fit beter structurally)
Punches: 1 Step (the ER line was cool in Onlii's verse but 1 Step hit harder line for line)
Personals: 1 Step (the openning bar had the best personal in the battle)
Structure: 1 Step
Creativity: Tie
Complexity: Onlii
Wordplay: 1 Step (the Bam-B line was cool)
Enjoyment: 1 Step

Vote: One Step Beyond


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