Voted For: GKillaz05
i aint gonna break this down G had better flow, but u both still need to work on it....couold be better One Mic, u sound like ur trynna sing, if u have to stretch words to make it flow, expand on ur lines and make them longer, and u strugglin too much for breath..... G, u have the ability to write, but ur flow is off, its seems to take 3 bars to get one rhyme, then 2 bars for the next, u needa be more consitant... but all in all, G got this |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Both of y'all verses need some work... but as far as content go, GKillaz took it easily as far as flow GKillaz was better than onemic's. One mic you sounded as tho you were reading, the beat choice in my opinion didn't go well wit your voice, that TI beat had to go. You picked up towards the end but GKillaz took this with better consistency as well as lyrics (however I wasn't feeling the Mike Tyson bit you had in there, GKillaz). Keep elevating you two. V/ GKillaz |
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Voted For: one mic
One Mic - First thing I noticed is that your presence is horrible. You sound like you are whispering with your mouth wide open or something. This is also killing your flow. You don't really even have any punches, let alone personals. This was a dissapointment......sorry. GKillaz - you need to raise your vocals badly. Your beat overpowers your voice so bad that I can hardly hear your words.....then at the end when you say "Yeah......you're over" it gets loud again......Your presence sounds better than One Mic's but your flow is of as well. You didn't really have too many punches in here. I'm stuck at choosing between a little better presence or a little more punches..........gotta go with the punches.... Vote - One Mic......he had more attempts at punches :thumbup:™ |
aight thanx for the vote. uppin for more.................
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Voted For: GKillaz05
I vote for GKillaz becuz his lyrics worked better with the beat, it flowed a lot better, he spit more clearly, as the fact that One Mics spit was really quiet and hard to understand, win goes to GK |
Voted For: GKillaz05
hmmm....this battle realli wasnt that good both of u need to Elevate allot more and try harder....especially one mic u need work on ur flow u sound like ur loosin ur words when u read and u need more emotion and As for Gkilla u needa work on ur flow and lower ya vocals lol bout to lose my hearing listenin to ur verse and both of ur punches didnt make me even think or say wow....lol sounded like filler words to me...not tryna start beef but work harder Vote Gkilla |
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