Voted For: MuRkInEm

murkin my vote goes to u . ur guys verses were even but that first line in murkins verse won it natural killa ur lines were good keep on gettin it

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Voted For: Natural killa

nk def got this


punches-nk
personals-didn't really see any
metaphors-nk
creativity-nk
overall-nk

his vere was just more fresh and came harder at you merk.....nice battle.....rtf on anyone of my battles ya'll, thanks

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

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This was feedback posted for MuRkInEm
 

Pointless to even begin,no-one likes merk..they all Hatin on your fight
Wastin your verse?why bother,you've already wasted your life
concept ok, punch is weak, wordplay is ok
You must be really late,dyke..cuz all's ya shit's played,it's been done before
Ur like a bird down it's last breath.. that still hasn't begun to soar
a lil played out
It's fun,for sure..pickin' on you & being a bully,can't say i don't love it
& Rap's called a mountain to some,so i can say u fell off the summit
Nice wordplay, your best punch in your verse
Hell,your a dumb bitch,that's stays clueless..you got no sense
If dicks were balloons you'd prolly be the first to blow them
Lol nce punch - ok wordplay - played out concept
Let go of the pen,it's like murder..cuz your beyond wack
your verse can't "strike"..like havin' an unbreakable contract
nce wordplay ok punch
Cats may say some ya shit's dope..but that's only cuz u bit those
But Lyrically insane it is............. to even think that your shit's dope
Nice closer - good punch

vs.

Dumb. To think this cat's a natural killa~
When the most violence he's seen is the vid.eo to Thrilla~
ha lol nce punch - good opener
Rakim's his avy, more convenient it couldn't have been~
Cause when this' is over ya'll gonna say I Rak(d h)im~
good concept, should have worded it better - played out
I'll split him, pull his spine out and spin it on the tip~
I'm not kidding, the boy will be doing backflips~
lmfao nce worplay - best punch in your verse
I'm badd when I spit, it could be called verboten~
Mangle his hand, leave him a finger so the other fo(u)r()gotten~
Nice wordplay - ok punch
Nine lines already, damn not enough to address your flaws~
But hey, a full size novel couldn't even address them all~
Good concept - ok punch - ok closer

damn good battle both really had hard punches so when it all comes down i looked who was more creative and wittier
both textees really did good on this battle and came with some good wordplay and punches
but wit no hate i think MerkInEm came a little more wittier and creative so he gets my vote
Vote = MerkInEm

Voted For: MuRkInEm

yo betta structure and hardre punchez iight fo sho

well. i got three votes, but one of the cats didnt poll it. but aight, uppin it.

lmao at this.

You got whored...

lol at all the newbies gettin in here too...

NK RTF, i onmly got 1 open..

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....................................checkin the polls man.................

Post a link and I'll RTF asap :thumbup:
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Voted For: Natural killa

Vote: Natural Killa

Flow was even between these catz, so that was a tie. Punches were a tie, I didn't feel like either had punches that were hard-hitting...Multis went to Natural killa, he had more of them...Wordplay went to Natural Killa, dug the "your verse can't "strike" like havin' unbreakable contract"...that was good shit...Personals went to Murkinem, though they weren't great, he had more than 1 of them in his drop...It was a pretty close battle, but I thought Natural Killa edged by in this one.

Vote: Natural Killa