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Voted For: sabre

Yo, I don’t know why you bother with text
This guys from “the furnace”, ‘cause im just burnin him to death
KINDA WEAK
Try and act nice, but really you just an arrogant bitch
Goin to mcdonalds, is the only time you could be stackin the chips
CHIPS? YOU SURE ABOUT THAT ONE....
I’ll put my mac-to-your-ribs, straight gettin’ you laced kid
You 165? Ah rite, so, its not only your lyrics that’s age’n!
NOW HAD YOU HAVE SAID BIG MAC TO YOUR MC RIB....
Straight up man, il lace you in one second
This guys overrated as fuck, just like David Beckham
THIS WAS WEAK
Oh rite, you mad ‘cause I didn’t vote for you?
You so dumb, you’d probly take coke if someone just told you to
THIS WAS REALLY WACK
fuckin nerd, I don’t need much for this, all I need is one mic
this guy’s like star wars unfinished, ‘cause you aint got the light
NO EXP. NEEDED IT WAS YOUR BEST WORD PLAY AND PUNCH



you're not a star trekking anywhere, this is your final fronteir
cause with that name, you're still one mic short of a rap career
DECENT PUNCH
fucking queer, my shots are smoking, dont get it twisted
i'm firing you so much, dude, you weren't even in the business
OK YOUR DONE WITH WORK
my shit is sickness, you don't even know where to start, fag
i'm hurling so many punches...i'll throw in a couple barf bags
THAT WAS GOOD
you don't understand, you suck, you're not at all clever
you're in PLL.........^^^^^^^^ thats why you have a shitty record
THAT CONCEPT WAS GOOD BUT IF YOU LOOK AT WHAT YOU SAID IT WASN'T THAT GREAT, CONCEPT SAVES IT THOUGH
dont even know how you have wins, but you do really blow
so i easilly storm away with this one...without any rain or snow
DECENT PUNCH
you're so damn whack, dude, i'm not even trying here to end it
i'd call you a queer again....but even gay men would be offended
KINDA WEAK

ok this one goes to sabre, one mic came too weak for this one

Rtf on my g killa battle

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Voted For: sabre

J.D - i thought you were going to take kid when i first started to read your verze, but your quickly feel off and just started rambling on.
your punches were not effective and didnt realyl hit at all.

sabre - your dropped some ok punches, but aswell, you feel off towards the end. good play on name bro,but step it up a level.

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damn....some one hates gay people... but on the real both didn't come to hard on this battle. J.D. really didn't try...both verses needed less fillers and shit talking and more punchlines or mettaphors. at first I was skeptical over savres verse but as he progress he through some punches and personals. they were weak still but u could tell he wasn't really trying to hard. at least I hope he wasn't. I cant vote cuz dont have 500 post yet but if i could Id give this one to sabre...
could any one of u please vote in one my battles in my sig...its hard to get votes in this shit.

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nice verses,if I could vote id be for sabre.

Good verses by both

Voted For: sabre

alright this battle wasn't anything too great.....j.d..........your punches were whack..your structurer was whack..but you attempted a couple personals..and although they wern't hard hitting personals..they were personals none the less....sabre..your verse wasn't that great either..but i felt like the punches were better..and the personals were better..and over all..your verse was just more consistant..and you showed a stronger knowledge of text...so you get my vote

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stop bein a homofobe... u herb................ but yea u won

Voted For: sabre

sabre won this easly he had better punches and flow and rymes were more tighter
best line:
you're so damn whack, dude, i'm not even trying here to end it
i'd call you a queer again....but even gay men would be offended


one mic i really wasnt feeling ur stuff u had crappy rymes they really need elavation.structure was ok some lines were too long and some were to short and hardly any flow

worst line :

Oh rite, you mad ‘cause I didn’t vote for you?
You so dumb, you’d probly take coke if someone just told you to


vote sabre