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A-Sez 01-11-06 09:10 PM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
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twenty9 01-11-06 10:41 PM

i'll change the way i format my rhymes, i do it like that cuz its easier 4 me 2 read

okay 01-11-06 11:37 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

JC Real the mafucka used 2 b kool, but u turned into jacko, now u smoke that dick just like it was tobacco.
^^^naw weak opener
i now ya scared bitch, u goin into hiding, i can tell by the hairs on ya head im NOT finding, heads so bald its fuckin shiney.
^^^Ight punch funny
i no u never put in work on the street, i can tell ya bitch is bored, send her here 2 get a lil skeet , just listen 2 my rhymes, i'll knock the sox of ya fuckin feet.
^^^No.....
m.d.c i was born to be, i no ya punk ass wishes u was me, haze got ya all fucked up, ya vison is blurry, yo get ready 4 my fuckin rap fury.
^^^THis was weak.....
I no my shit got ya think "thakin on this guy aint fair ta me" bitch ya rhymes is weak, get a rhyme dictionary
^^^^No at this closer

Ross battlin me was ur worst situation
u gotta calm down and take ur medication
^^^Ight opener
u think ur better than me cus u got lots a dough
u a punk ass bitch, i'm pimp slappin u hoe
^^^ight
u have a afro wat u thinking ur hood?
i call u the lumber jack cus u the first one who handles wood
^^^Good
u screamin MDC to the top of ur lungs try it
u more faggot in one person then the gay pride riot
^^^Ight
u thinking ur gangsta is like ricky martin being straight
two incested cousins fucked ross is what u create
^^^lol at the closer

I felt this was onesided twenty9 u had a weak verse that didnt diss it went on an on....u need to werk on that....also ur punchs u need them...jc u came wit a solid verse that had punchs an they werent played....V/JC REAL......RRRTTFFF in the sig

twenty9 01-12-06 12:06 AM

sumthins tellin me im not gonna win this battle....meh

dazy 01-12-06 12:14 AM

hahaha i coulda told u from the start u were gonna lose cus u suck bad twenty 9

twenty9 01-12-06 12:25 AM

jordan u punk ass bitch, aight we gonna have another battle

twenty9 01-12-06 07:32 PM

JC im still waitin 4 u 2 confirm that ur gonna give me a rematch........................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..................................

Snypa 01-12-06 09:23 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

Flow: JC
Punches: JC
Personals: dont know
Metaz: JC

im stoppin there, pretty one sided

JC had this all the way

Twenty, ur lines where WAY too stretched and it ruined ur flow

D523 01-15-06 02:29 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
..................... lol

trakk*star 01-15-06 02:31 PM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
checkin polls this was horrible.......................................... .................................................. .........

dazy 01-16-06 04:09 PM

god this thang taking 4ever god peepw we know i won just finish it off

GKillaz05 01-16-06 09:31 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

Ross battlin me was ur worst situation
u gotta calm down and take ur medication
u think ur better than me cus u got lots a dough
u a punk ass bitch, i'm pimp slappin u hoe

vs

NOTHIN'

OVERALL - JC gets this becuase he had better rhymes and punchlines, the other guys rap was just whack!

Vote - REAL!

*Antic* 01-16-06 11:48 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

JC Real took this one, his last 3 bars clinched it. JC took punches, barely, the first two bars were weak, but the last 3 did it. twenty9 had some aiight punches, but they didn't land very hard. Personals were pretty much non-existent. No wordplay. Twenty9 took multis, though they weren't very strong. Close battle.

Vote- JC Real


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