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This was feedback posted for D-mat
pretty decent battle...................... just checcin poll
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Voted For: B1ZK3T
B1ZK3T-You had less punches but you had better ones that topped his, it seems like you started off great but near the middle you kinda lost it, but you still gettin my vote. D-mat-You had a few good ones here n there but the flow got fucked up cus you had some weak punches there, it was like one good punch every what two to three lines, chopped up flow. |
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This was feedback posted for D-mat
biz- no real punchez in your verse. youve got nothing in this verse i like. work on your wording.
dmat- u need to work on your wording to make real punchez. also, try making some witty stuff. had a few ok punches. |
This was feedback posted for B1ZK3T
yo i thought biz took it cause he lines were less played
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Voted For: B1ZK3T
You win Dmat has no punches whatsoever Dmat: your just saying crap about him its not even a diss. "I'm gangster liek deniro"WTF? all your doing is putting dumb sentences togeter and putting a rhyme on it. your flow was bad i don't even know why you were acepted to psa. I can take that whole crew out by myself. Biz: your verse was not as good but it had some punches and some ok personals you win this. youhad better stucture and flow and your were kinda better v/ Biz |
Ummmmmmmm, I don't understand it...Do y'all not get my punches or what? Maybe I needa tone down the complexity abit
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alrite uppin all we need is one more
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Voted For: B1ZK3T
B1ZK3T - You had an ok verse, your punches where ok, and you had an ok flow. Best Line - D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast Worst Line - Ya can't see strikes when ya head's already layin' beside Actin' like Rambo in this battle ya still can't eva be sly D-Mat - You had basic rhymes. You didnt really use any wordplay or punches. Best Line - on Rb they clowned and here they don't know.. after this shit thet wotn dig your flow.. Worst Line - Most of those lines - sorry dude. OVERALL - This battle was one sided. Biz gets the win. He had the better flow, and his punchlines where better. D-Mat your shit was to basic. You need to up your lines, think more creative punchlines, and try to learn wordplay. You also need to start usin' personals. Check the tutorials! Vote - B1ZK3T RTF in SIG! |
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