that's cool.................nice drop homie, uppin for some more shit

Voted For: *Antic*

*antic* cuz his opening was stronger in my opinion and i felt that he had more flow and his rhymes tied better

but tech had the better closer but i couldn't see any rhyming in the first 2 bars (note i know across rhymes with loss but appearently the word was supposed 2 b laws so it didnt make 2 much sence 2 me)


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that explaination is kinda vague...tech, we kin keep that or you kin scrap that, whatever ya want.

twenty9, be real specific when ya explain stuff, break it down into categories.

aight u can scrap it if u wish, i'll rewrite it l8er but im kinda lazy so i wont get around 2 it 2nite and dont worry, i'll write it like it was a fuckin english exam, speekin of skool, im gonna spend more time on this than the 2 projects i got due on the 23rd

you choose, i won't scrap it since i don't want you to think i do it to win......but all my bars rhymed.....it's cool tho

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Voted For: *Antic*

a yo antic took dis one wit way harder punches and betta structure

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Voted For: *Antic*

Nothing rhymes with lead in Antic's 4th line... Rhyming is the name of the game... over everything else you have to rhyme... this is what rapping is... it's rhyming while carrying a topic, in this case it's a battle... but you still have to rhyme... and the more complicated you do it the more impressive it is... but in teh end all be all you have to rhyme...

However punch for punch Antic was far more creative than Tech, and had the far more original punches... and since alot of what Tech said was rather played... Antic's punches also hit alot harder... and the name play personals were ok as well...

Opener: Antic
Closer: Antic
Punches: Antic
Personals: Antic
Creativity: Antic
Complexity: Antic
Sturucture: Neither
Enjoyment: Antic

Vote: Antic

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