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This is your very first single man? no it isn't is it? well i guess I've never heard a single from you before besides this one. Your flow is really dope, I love the way you rap. just a great delivery on mostly every beat. your lyrics are good and your hook pretty good which really shows how serious you take your music. MAS should be glad to have you, you hold MAS down quite well. overll I like this shit man, I might just download it tomorrow in the morning:thumbup:

rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218341
I'll have some new shit soon.

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^aiight appreciate feed a lot man. uppp i got you

lmao @ u recycling.......... that is all

track is pretty straight

^yea, i don't see the problem in using lines from a net site battle into a song yo. If I liked them, might as well throw them in. i don't see what's so bad. =/

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damn nice shit,feelin the flow alot.

this was ok flow was good best ive heard from you owns most on rv wasnt really feeling the lyrics though hookl was catchy 7/10

beat is dope, lyrics are cool. quality is[/jealous] hook is meh.
good track.

^aiight thanks to both. uppp...

ok good beat choice on the fab beat......ok good multies u opened.....flow in verse 1 is good.......however u coulda changed up more....ya rhyme scheme changed but the rhythm of ya flow didn't..given it the feeling of sounding the same.....ok hook.....this is mixed good.....its lyrical focus is wack but it has a nice flow...prolly coulda used sum addlibs or a more emphasized/exaggerated catch phrase to really make it jump out!....second verse....same as verse 1......rhyme sheme changes but the rhythm didn't.....so it gives it the impression of being the same..however it was a sound flow....verse 3 is same as other 2 verses..same feed can be applied.......ya delivery in all 3 verses was solid got a nice laidback vibe....it was calm but not monotone...good shit......pronounciation was solid here......overall sum of ya best work fo sure son......def keep dropping...improving & GROWING as a artist.....stay up fam.......1