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-Substance- 01-19-06 12:37 PM

damn, can someone please vote....................................

-Substance- 01-20-06 09:22 PM

uppin this shite for a vote.....fuck drops some votes it only takes about 2 minutes

Solo 01-21-06 08:33 AM

Uppin for some fuckin votez sleeperz..........lolz

.:Mike Check:. 01-21-06 08:38 AM

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 
checkin pollz...nice drop both...i cant vote though cuz im in Tech's crew, but even if i could i dont know who i would vote for anyway, both had nice verses, and alot of wordplay, i like it....anyway, keep at it, and Tech i dropped a sig request in your shop in tha crew forum, check it sometime, no rush

Solo 01-21-06 08:18 PM

Uppin for more votez...letz get this finished homiez

Mentalz 01-22-06 08:46 PM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

You couldnt lyricaly hurt me if u had rapz stocked-with-nailz
Couldnt get a 'signed' record deal like the contractz-in-'brail'
pretty decent line
Cuz Solo alwayz spitz at a range-with-the-heat
Tech writez his name on his shoez and claimz hez got his name-on-the-street
played
I got lotz of punchez, man i got a ton-of-it
even if u were sprintin though the sewer u couldnt be 'runnin-shit'
played
Ill lyricaly kill and put the glock-away
wanna shoot! bitch u aint got the 'juice' to 'squeeze' even if u 'concentrate'
played
Im a heavy spitter, and im drinkin-weightz
Ill put a 'ruler' through your brain so can be thinkin-'straight'
ok line nothing special
Dont even spit dog, just save-ya-linez
Cuz Ill take out ya brain with my handz and make you change-ya-mind
pretty cool closer that opener had em thinking u were dope then i read the rest of it very dissapointing structure was fucked you need to work on personals and creativity

I'll Leave You Flipped, Heated, And Rolled Up Like Tortilla's
I'd Ask You What You'll Become.........
.......But In Year I'll Hit Up 'On The Border' To See Ya'
haha funny personal
I'll Place You In A Casket, Dig Your Grave And You'll Be An Underground Artist
No Bobody Knows Were You Will-is..............
decent line could be worded better
Til I Make You My Hostage
Flash Through The Mist, Clenched Fist To Leave You Twitchin'
Your Spits Couldn't Do Shit To Me....Even If Your Breath Was Kickin!
horrible line
Solo? That Ain't A Sayin, It's How You Stand On The Stage
You Can Wine Up For Years.......And Still Not Get Better With Age!
first line is good second is all filler
Man Over Board! Fuck, We'll Let The Sharks Eat This Mate
It'll Be Bumpy Ride.....
....Especially When I Run Over The Acne On Your Face!
ok closer

im giving this to you because u had a personal u need to work on ur structure it messes up the flow also try and up ur vocab

Mentalz 01-22-06 08:47 PM

damn personals he really does have alto of acne :/

-Substance- 01-22-06 10:39 PM

lmao.......don't be cruel.....uppin this for some votes............

-Substance- 01-24-06 12:37 PM

uppin for some votes peeps........................

Solo 01-28-06 10:26 AM

Uppin this bitch man.....Letz have thoez votez come in now ey................................................ ............................

-Substance- 01-28-06 11:25 PM

uppin for vote!!!!!




i'll rtf.................................

Solo 01-29-06 01:40 AM

wtf............................................... .................................................. .VOTEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Solo 01-29-06 02:31 PM

WTF is up with this site man................................fuuuuck... Upppin

-Substance- 01-31-06 01:38 PM

uppin for the last fuckin time...........................

Lay-z 01-31-06 08:40 PM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Cuz Solo alwayz spitz at a range-with-the-heat
Tech writez his name on his shoez and claimz hez got his name-on-the-street

-vs-

Flash Through The Mist, Clenched Fist To Leave You Twitchin'
Your Spits Couldn't Do Shit To Me....Even If Your Breath Was Kickin!
Solo? That Ain't A Sayin, It's How You Stand On The Stage
You Can Wine Up For Years.......And Still Not Get Better With Age!

both seemed to be off, with solo self promotoing his self and usin weak lines, and gun talk dont cut it.

tech, your verse was weak with key strong points. you pull out the close win,your lines seemed to be stretched at times but fix that and you will get better.

V/ Tech Skillz


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