Aight the beat is aight...first cat flow and delivery is coo lyrics is str8...quality is decent...the hook is aight nuttin special tho...second cat decent flow and delivery quality is aight...over-all coo collabo keep it up.

heard this beat before.....d block maybe?

para....flow has gotten better....need some more hi's in your vocals so theyll stand out more....need to be mixed a lil better........

other than that...i have no complaints about it...


hook..i dunno..just not feelin it...


2nd dude....your coo....but u need to let it out a lil more....you gotta decent voice n shit...but be a lil more loud...flow is coo....emotion is koo....just need to deliver it a lil better...u got a lot of potential man...


pro....still need to up that flow some man....your getting better.....but just keep tryin to up the flow.......until u get it at a point u need to be at

aiight koo thanks mayne....thanks for all the feed guys...and the beat, not d-block.. i forget where paranoid found it...but its not d-block

no it's not d block it's some person off s'click.

amyway uppin for more feedback...

listening....

beat is hot.....

para ure voice sounds a lil robotic..the only thing I could just suggest is work on the emotion on that because itll put fluctuations in youre voice....presence is kl...flow is getting much better...but the robotic shit u gotta work on..every1 has that prolem...haveing emotion is not to sound like a derranged nigga..its jus changing ure voice shit so u can give a fresh vibe....lyrics are nice

The next guy, Snypa prety nice...flow is nice...quality is nice..add some more lows on that..lyrics are koo...keep it goin there...work on delivery

The third guy..same thing as paranoid a lil worse u have bad pronounciation i have dat a lil too..and its a bit robotic...it sounds ure foreign..are you?..if so I understand...anyways keep it up..holla..1

no i aint foreign :cussing: i keep on gettin that shit from people like im really foreign :cussing: no i aint foreign and i never will be i got way better since i did this and im starting ta sound better and less foreign that just came with the bad pronounacation i had i suppose

^don't get mad man, I was at your level once.

lol aint mad just paranoid :)

i like the beat, first cat just needs to put more into the delivery, theres not enough energy - the hook is egh, it really could have used more emotion, some dubs, somethin to make it stand out.... second cat was better, could use some polishing but he stood out on the track... third cat made # 1 and 2 look like big and pac, just had no prescence, sounded freestyled in parts, unrehearsed iunno--work on how you put your words out cuz you sound unsure of where your goin and its not cool. keep doin it... thanks for the feedback before sorry it took so long to rtf.