cooooooooooooooooookiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!

I like that beat......but it didn't really match your style. I never thought a hype flow could be monotonous, but you seemed to do it.....lol. Try to throw some inflection in your voice at parts so it keeps people intrested. You fell off beat a couple times, but not bad for the most part. You could use a little help on the quality too.....read a tutorial or two......they help a lot :thumbup:™

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

^thanks bro, production/ quality is simply mic problem. As for the monotonous, I layed this track with more variety in my voice, but it just didnt sound right, so I kept the same pitch and style thru out. Just seemed right for this track.

aight the beat is aight...flow and delivery seems abit off sor some reason...but for most of the part its coo...accent is abit thick...lyrics is nice...the hook is str8...second verse is str8...over-all not bad ish man keep itu p.

-uNo-

Feed used 2/8/06 "Whos To Blame?"

thanks .

Such a fuckin' dope song man..

Really feeling this track, amazing flow, dope lyrics..

Wicked beat as well..

*puts on iPod*

Thanks bro .

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