It was mediocre. You didn't rip it that well. Your voice is cool. But most of the punchlines you used are played. You were on point at sometimes but other times it was sketchy. Quality was alright too. I don't care for the beat all that much though. Decent.

werd i knew this beat, nice lyrics man, thats my kind, nice flow but sometime its forced, nice quality, i like your voice man, nice hook, i had an idea for this hook but your already did it, mmm is there a verse left lol& anyway good track fam

RTF on my beat:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...918#post2639918

lol........Fresh Azimiz

Anyway, I don't like that beat that much cause it makes you spit a little slow. You flowed alright, not too much complaints there. You had some alright lyrics too. Your hooks seem to always need some help. Don't worry though.....I had the same exact problem. Just experiment with new ways to make it sound more like a hook......you seem to be pretty decent, but your quality is what is holding you back. Read a tutorial or two or buy some better equipment......that's all I can say about that.

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281