This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

checking the polls..........Weak battle overall.......................................

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote- Tha 1 An Onlii B

First off, having a few explainations is great, but don't have them be longer than your verses...I thought this battle was a little weak, but it was close. Both catz had some flow structure problems, so neither was better than the other...Both went heavy with Personals, and that's good, but don't just quote other people and take what they said to use on someone. The only decent personal in the battle, I thought, was in Tha 1 an Onlii B's last line...creativity. So he took Personals. Graffics and takin' what others said is cool, but not when your whole drop depends on it. JC Real took Multis, basically because he had them. No wordplay in this battle what-so-ever. Punches were taken By Tha 1 and Onlii, just barely. Neither cat had incredible punches, but I thought that some of JC's stuff was forced. Onlii's punches were basic, but more effective, in my opinion.

So there ya have it. Keep workin' on shit.

hey thats sucks ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, uppin for votes jc real wanna win this

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

ROFLMFAO @ tha turtle pic, lmfao, checkin polls, werd

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

I hope it was done real fast coz that was poor...

Flow: Onlii B (Picture fucked JC structure and shit up)
Multis: Tie (Barely any)
Metaz: JC
Wordplay: Onlii B (Barely)
Personals: JC
Punches: Onlii B

*Vote Onlii B* Just. It was quite bad but if it was REAL quick then i guess it's o.k.

-Peace-

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it was fast...trust me...im tha type of person that will end up forgetting about a battle if i dont drop soon after i check in...thanx for tha vote man....uppin for more

no im uppin for more lol jokin man uppin for votes

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback thats a bunch of bull shit my vote had tons of feedback im complaining

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

its actually called a hurdle...yeah

but wtf is up with that pic, and lol @ play on punches/punching someone

oh man, a good laugh

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This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

b took this, but that was a funny pic by JC. and a small little note for JC dont post a pic of urself on this site wearing a "g-unit" hat on this website and then say u hate 50 cent.

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

checkin polls....

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

*smh* #1 that turtle pic is horrible JC you'd a been better off just dropping a link to his mug shot... or atleast get a real graphic head to make the pic for you, it was way too big and it actually took attention away from your verse... and dispite the personal you had in a ya verse it was still a very weak and uncreative verse.... Onlii crushed you, he had the far better more creative punches personals, structure, and wordplay... there really was no comparison here...

Opener: Onlii
Closer: Onlii (the only real attempt at wordplay in the battle)
Punches: Onlii
Personals: Onlii
Structure: Onlii
Creativity: Onlii
Complexity: Onlii
Enjoyment: Onlii

Vote: Onlii

personnally u voted outta hate but i guess thats just ur ways

uppin for votes

I always vote objectively... *smh @ hate* you just need to elevate... go practice

JC dont take any of this as hate, its all actually love, its critiscm and its meant to help you, and that vote for you was bullshit, he voted for you because you had more lines and thats bullshit...that vote for me by drakel was also bullshit, i respect that you got that vote dq'ed but tha vote for me from Ikaros was explained, its ok though im not worried about it...uppin for more votes on this, cmon lets close this battle and declare a winner...word...1