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Fire_Optikz© 02-09-06 11:05 PM

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 
wow just wow.. jc i thought you were good.. lmao ...thought

H.D. 02-11-06 12:36 AM

hmmmm some votes would be good...
yeah so... Vote

dazy 02-12-06 10:02 PM

poeple vote on this battle people it isnt hard u know just write about the battle then post ur vote aint that hard

dazy 02-13-06 11:00 AM

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rexless 02-13-06 12:10 PM

Voted For: H.D.


yo im battlin this punk bitch h.d.
ur rymes dont make sence, how u expect to be a emcee
just flowin
u say ur lines r great, kiddo u dont even ryme
people get shocked when they readin ur lines, like they eating a lime*
you dont get shocked when you eat a lime, * should of REWORD IT said something like: you give out a change in face like eating a lime when reading your lines/ u'r skills like 2 ugly people thinking they there breeding is FINE/ feel me??*
u thinkin ur a tv channel mister high definition
u fuck with me, i'll leave u in the hospital in critical condition
aight basic
im gonna win this battle all easy and nicely
u winnin this battle is like u getting a woman, highly unlikey
nah,
h.d. ur the worst mutherphukker i ever heard about
one last thing, fuck you, werd im out

weak ending... you had 1 potential punch that got screwed up





You rock color contacts ya need to realize, you’re just not a real guy*
THIS IS NOT A BAR, WEAK START...

Kid I knock you out ya “right” mind, you shoulda “left” when I signed in
Fist ya minds out, tape and rewind it; I’m insane punching ya minds in*
bit multis...
You talking arms, while I’m talking lose two, you sweet like yoohoo*
Just because I choose too, judge, jury, and execute you, go boo who*
nah weak multis
I’ll kill you, revive ya soul and trap you in chuck’s sexually confused seed*
You a herb; I abuse trees, fake gangsta’s get taken off, so you lose leaves*
nice meta, good
You’re structure would make more sense written on crumpled loose leaf*
With each sentence punches impact so hard they could make a tooth bleed
aight,
Point to ya grill when voters tell me show us the proof please? Truth leads
To the matter of speaking, comedy? This pic is the laughter you seeking*
HA GOOD ENDING,

i thought you was more focus in this battle you had more punches and personal a bit of multis, def you improved from past battles i've peep keep elevating kid. word of advice dont give out a longer explanation then you have written bars it effect's the voters choise....

dazy 02-13-06 08:09 PM

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H.D. 02-16-06 12:06 AM

mmmhmmmmmm... yeah what he said uppin' this... vote mofos

dazy 02-16-06 10:33 PM

stupid mofos vote aint that hard we are here so someone wins not someone waites a year just for a vote

dazy 02-20-06 07:09 PM

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dazy 02-21-06 04:01 PM

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dazy 02-23-06 08:13 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ppin 4 votes

*Antic* 02-23-06 11:40 PM

Voted For: H.D.

Vote- HD

Flow- HD. His was better structure, more complex...JC Real had an inconsistent and basic flow.

Punches- HD. He threw some punches, coupled with some personals that landed hard. JC Real threw like 1 or 2 punches, and they weren't very good.

Personals- HD. He had them. JC Real didn't have any personals.

Multis- HD. He had them. JC Real didn't have any.

Wordplay- eh....nothin' from either cat worth commenting on...HD I guess, he had that "right" and "left" thing in his first bar. HD.

HD took this. He had harder punches, better concepts, and personals...JC Real didn't really have any of that. Pretty one-sided.

dazy 02-24-06 12:19 AM

i hate u ^^^^^^^^^^^ anyways uppin fo votes

H.D. 02-28-06 12:25 PM

Don't hate appreciate ... uppin' for more honest votes...

dazy 03-02-06 04:52 PM

uppin fo votes on this mutha fukks votes


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