This was good, nice collab. Both verses were very well done, with a lot of multies and internal rhyming. The flow was great, i didnt have any problems with it. My favorite bars were:

My Mind's Concrete Thoughts Cracked And Corrupt
Nerves Exploding While My Vaines Vastly Errupt

^^Nice imagery right there

Starving of thirst, the first of the worst tortures embedded in the mind
Signs one finds remind, of axes to grind, seek darkness stay out the lime

^^Especially liking the first line, it was nice. Defenitely a nice drop. 8.5/10. Hit me up for a collab sometimes, ya'll are good. Pls rtf on anything in the sig. Peace.

aight, thanks for the feedback homie......i'll hit you up for a collab soon