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okay......beat is kinda amateurish...not bad but not great neither.....ya flow has def improved but its rushed in spots....first verse was koo but lyrically it was real simple an common..u approached this very generically....awwww def not feeling the hook seems wrong for the beat..an it was mixed bad.........also everythign seems too loud in general the bass is dominating on beat an the chorus break is really loud as well as vocals on hook...second verse was decent but it lost the appeal of first verse due to the emotion falling off sum....damn I really dun like that hook.......it really hurt track......this wasn't for me man....it coulda been way better...I aint gon give that bullshit response generally given here "it wasn't ya best"..Im a jus be real wit u an say I wasn't feeling it son..no hate..I jus wasn't...........1