You need to stop posting mate..your already getting known as RV's biggest herb.

come on people vote for fuck sack we need this battle finished with

come on return tha favor please in the battle in my sig

Voted For: Drome

Drome came on top with everything, better punches, cept the brother mother thing was stupid, but the rest topped king slimm.

Kings opener was ok even though it ain't really made sense, or went with the rest of the verse

This was feedback posted for Drome
 

this battle was wack, therefore i will only check pollz..........

Voted For: Drome

yo you kinda owned him a lil ... all you gotta do is re words your shit and you'll be alot better...


i see ehlla potiential and shit in you.... so just keep practicing and you'll prolly be hella dope.......

slimmm... you need to actually use metaphores and learn how to write better BARS... not lines but BARS>... like make your first line have to do with your second line.........but once you figyure that shit out you will prolly be dope...

Voted For: Drome

youll suffer de-feat, cause your a fckin fairy, slimm
and your only legless cause i'm tearin 'limm
^iight
you fuck where your from?..your a weirdo brother
you incest slag, didnt you come from your mother
^nah
you fuckin love 'er, thats sick..and my flows are true
I dont need to hand you the EL..dios fuckin owned you too
^ok

this chump beatin me iz jus shy of impossible
u got weak syn"drome",my flow iz unstoppable
^nah..self glorify
u don stand a chance, cuz u spit used quotes
ill take u bk 2 skool-kid u mite wanna take notes
^played
im straight 2 da pint ya raps iz deatuars
DIVE DAT SYN"DROME", STOP YA HEART WEN I DROP METAPHORS
^no

V/Drome
overall jus had a better verse

Voted For: Drome

this chump beatin me iz jus shy of impossible
u got weak syn"drome",my flow iz unstoppable
^self glorify..not good at all
u don stand a chance, cuz u spit used quotes
ill take u bk 2 skool-kid u mite wanna take notes
^played..
im straight 2 da pint ya raps iz deatuars
DIVE DAT SYN"DROME", STOP YA HEART WEN I DROP METAPHORS
^no

vs

youll suffer de-feat, cause your a fckin fairy, slimm
and your only legless cause i'm tearin 'limm
^ok
you fuck where your from?..your a weirdo brother
you incest slag, didnt you come from your mother
^doesnt hit hard
you fuckin love 'er, thats sick..and my flows are true
I dont need to hand you the EL..dios fuckin owned you too
^nah

V/Drome