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Premanition 03-16-06 06:16 PM

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rexless 03-17-06 05:09 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tech Skillz
Voted For: Premanition

damn, i like that punch bar and the whole cup shit. premanition def got this with fresher punches and a more well structured verse. rexless you need to get better and improve.



why you hate'in on me for??

since we battle you been hate'in on me??

fuck outta here keep it moving...

Journal!st 03-17-06 06:21 AM

Voted For: Premanition

this was just so fuckin one sided man.....SO FUCKIN ONE SIDED!!!!


better flow, creativity, punches, multies and wordplay!!!


REX dont ever battle somebody who can easily DEMOLISH U!!!!! elevate more...


V/ PREM for just being DOPE!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Magic5 03-19-06 02:45 AM

This was feedback posted for Premanition
 
I'm too tired to leave a dope vote, but Premanition took this. .

rexless 03-25-06 09:10 PM

upp'in for more votes to end this battle already its been open longer then a 24 hour drive throu...

Premanition 03-27-06 02:38 PM

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In-Vision 03-31-06 01:38 AM

Voted For: Premanition

okay...i thought this actually really close...here is the break down....

1st bar....less than mediocre openers for both of you....but i'd say it was dead even.

2nd bar....i gotta give it to premanition...because he used a personal....and although rex had a decent punch..it could have been set up way better...not to mention..prems personal was true..your structure is a bit stretched..

3rd bar....i gotta give this to prem too...the wordplay on the name was pretty cool...and both punches were weak..but prem still had the word play...

4th bar..gotta give it to rex.....he had an OK punch...vs....another OK..punch..but whack set up

5th bar - rexless gets this again..prem had a good set up...but whack punch...and rex had a decent punch...

now that you're verse is done prem..due to the fact that it's 3-2....i would give you the win.......but rexless wasn't done yet...so i have to finish reading...

okay rex....the last punch was whack......and the never land one was kinda nice....but even if i gave that to you....it'd be 3-3.....and you had a longer verse.........so

this goes to premanition for simply having quality over quantity

rexless 04-05-06 09:00 PM

^^ thanks for a honest and good brake down thoth nicely done!

Tempa 04-05-06 09:09 PM

Voted For: rexless

Premanition:
Elevated Frontlines? Kids Tryna Run Before He Walks
Rex The Kinda Guy You Know Is Dumb Before He Talks

^^^ First line was iight but tha second line was weak.

Structure Stretched Out Like The Metatarsals on Shaq
Remove those Intercostals Leave You 'Flat' On Ya 'Back'

^^^ Again first line was nice but second line doesn't make sense. Intercostals means between tha ribs.

Rex'Less' Than Wack, Infact His Track Record Is Cracked
Catering Beverages For Events & Still No Punch Is Packed

^^^ Nice little punch.

Style Not Tight Like Bow Knots, Your Dick In Donuts
‘Livin In The Shadows’ Like Small Breasts In Whole Cups

^^^ LOL. Good punch.

Hold Up! You In The Shadows? Hey Sorry Man I’ll Move
These Spits Got You Suckin Chips…
....Like Eatin Junk Food Through Tubes

^^^ Not feelin tha last one.

Rexless:
i'll Blow prem brains throu his mouth' so he can literally 'speak his mind
you still wouldnt win this battle if you tweaked ya verse and deleted mine

^^^Nice Nice opener.

Its like Ur Torso Hungry so ill send bullets till ya Chest Is Full
U couldn't Hang wit me if I was a 'Dick' and u were a 'Pair of Testicles

^^^Another good one.

I speak the truth. One bugged thug making ur net life hellish
Leave ur ass in floods of blood that’ll make New Orleans jealous

^^^Keep em comin.

Even less talent than "JC REAL" you'd have to go to the sun to be hot, G
But your a perfect role model by showing just how an MC should not be

^^^ Wasn't feelin tha first line, kinda played out. But i like the second.

I'll do you like policemen with nothing to do...prem is just a 'dead-beat'
The only time that he Exceles is when he's writing Spreadsheets

^^^LOL. Prolly my favorite bar outta ya verse.

My raps is in demand cuz I'm the man thats what you gotta understand
cause prem punches are like 'Micheal Jacksons Crib' they'll Never-Land

^^^ Another good punch.

nigga I stock raps, so diss me, & you'll receive what you ask for
i'll put prem throu so many 'Mental States', his 'brain'll' need a new Passport

^^^Good closer.

rexless 04-12-06 08:48 PM

upp'in for more votes,
thanks for voteing everyone.............

rexless 04-14-06 01:25 AM

upp'in for more votes,
thanks for voteing everyone.............

rexless 04-14-06 10:14 AM

upp'in for more votes......................................

(X)eed 04-15-06 08:19 AM

Voted For: rexless

LOLZ... hahahah lmfao

Its like Ur Torso Hungry so ill send bullets till ya Chest Is Full
U couldn't Hang wit me if I was a 'Dick' and u were a 'Pair of Testicles
I speak the truth. One bugged thug making ur net life hellish
Leave ur ass in floods of blood that’ll make New Orleans jealous
^^^^^^^
tht line fuckin did it 4 me bro... haha good word plae n shit.. flow wuz aiite.. but not i guess tha best?....


My raps is in demand cuz I'm the man thats what you gotta understand
cause prem punches are like 'Micheal Jacksons Crib' they'll Never-Land
nigga I stock raps, so diss me, & you'll receive what you ask for
^^^^^^^^

haha another good punch here bro.. fuck.. good shit

overall rexless took it out in mi opinion.. had wae harder hitting punches..

flow wuz ok..... i guess.. wud do.. ur verse did it 4 me tho..

aiite.. holla

M&rk 04-16-06 09:10 PM

Voted For: rexless

Style Not Tight Like Bow Knots, Your Dick In Donuts
‘Livin In The Shadows’ Like Small Breasts In Whole Cups
Elevated Frontlines? Kids Tryna Run Before He Walks
Rex The Kinda Guy You Know Is Dumb Before He Talks
vs.
i'll Blow prem brains throu his mouth' so he can literally 'speak his mind
you still wouldnt win this battle if you tweaked ya verse and deleted mine
Its like Ur Torso Hungry so ill send bullets till ya Chest Is Full
U couldn't Hang wit me if I was a 'Dick' and u were a 'Pair of Testicles
I speak the truth. One bugged thug making ur net life hellish
Leave ur ass in floods of blood that’ll make New Orleans jealous
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My raps is in demand cuz I'm the man thats what you gotta understand
cause prem punches are like 'Micheal Jacksons Crib' they'll Never-Land
^^played
nigga I stock raps, so diss me, & you'll receive what you ask for
i'll put prem throu so many 'Mental States', his 'brain'll' need a new Passport
^^good wordplay but i dont see how this is a punch at all
anway rex win 3 to 2, not really any real good punches from either though

Abraxas 04-29-06 12:58 AM

This was feedback posted for Premanition
 
Yoyu underestimated him didn't ya? .............................................


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