uppin this shit for people....god damn...if you want feedback..leave feedback for me...i'll rtf if you link me

upping....fuckin tards...read it....or die..............

Em yea I said Illy from oregon.
But yea its dope. i'ma feed on your latest one Political Criminal.

^^ HA GOT YOU... NOW I KNOW YOUR ALIAS.... lol...

ASIDE FROM THAT...

YO R-evolution...
I have 1 Question PLEZ ANSWER THIS...

WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU BE DOING OR DRINKING OR LISTENING TO OR WATCHING WHEN YOU WRITE YOU OPEN MIC??

yo this shit was fucking retarted fam i gotta give this up to you DANM...
10 outta 10 * YOU HAPPY NOW I GAVE U WHAT U DESERVE *
i didnt think you was that sick with open mic i knew uw as good but danm u def killed this shit right here...

flow good...
concept sick...
vocab tight...

A WELL DESERVE PIECE OF THE MONTH... * IF THEY EVER HAD ONE*

Hit Me Up For A Collabo 4-real...

thanks for the love, from both of you

and ransum..this is just scratching the surface...i told you, i don't need to lie about my talent...it speaks for me....and i don't do anything special, this is just what I do....i'd be down to collab..just let me know.

and they used to have OM of the month...and year...won both of those, won the month a few times...and was nominated almost every time..i'm the only person in the HOF who is in their for writing...and writing alone..everyone else is known for being pretty good, and also helping out the site a lot...me..just being really good.

you def made me a believer in your open mic's....

but battles hmmmmmmmmm.....

hahaha....

im not gonna rain on your party live nigga....

hmmmm Revolution.....ever been on GEF ???....just wondering

o yeah and EXACTLY WHAT RANSUM SAID SICK ASS SHIT....on that "intellegent" level....foreal .....~1~

you can't.

Battles, you havn't seen me even come close to try.

open mics...i try.

I am better at battling.

never even heard of it.


thanks for the props though.

deep....

flow was good and consitent, easy to catch but in a piece which requires alot of thought it wouldnt matter cuz after evry line ud have to think of its relation to the overall topic anyway

vocab was great and the usage applied was on point......


my past haunts my beginning, and the rest of me..
my past fucked my present, and gave birth to my destiny..
the evil once manifested, i request it to rest in peace..
obsessed hatred began attested, now i'm pressed to weep..
a tear sheds for every predicate dressed in weaponry..
broken hearts and jaws, fists and tongues posessed with me..
(i get all of this here......and its tight how u know how the way God really feels when shyt goes down, u expressed his emotions thru words.......as if they were ur own, deep.....i like the last line cuz ur basically sayin that people say his name in vain...nice)
every language is vital to my existance, I strike a chord..
Emotions expressed, no one ever heard this type before..
(lmao def feelin)

I'm all powerfull, but I can't seem to try and stipulate..
rules where you can't manipulate to avoid all the shit you hate..
(soooo true)

I shine light on a situation, and i've rained on your parade..
Flash Floods of baths of blood because i'm chained to your decay..
(illness......good thought, u must of been high thinkin of this part cuz its true)

and Lust can look like love if you wrap your words right..
(heh amen)

Use my ability to boast of your petty accomplishments..
you still envy, compared to him, you really havn't accomplished shit..
(good example relatin to the definition of envy and the result)

Wars and death become of me, the son of man's the son of me..
(hehe i like this one too)

The power of words, is also known to me as, the Power of God..
(as this is the summary.......it basically a message to all those spittin.....that words expressed are words from God.....and man in a way should be careful at times on how the use it.....its like a delegation of authority in a sense.....*shrugs* means alot to the point where its scary but in the end ur sayin ur God in summary due to this last line......and hell thats all u really needed, the rest supported it)

I wanna battle you In Topical Some time but not in here the Voting is slow and all the vets are gone.

i was feeling it ,you right with emotion like me
give me feed on mines gods gift 2 da world - wiley d