actualy....this was dropped 1st

iite listenin...

...i understand ya gotta talk at the intro cuz its a diss, buts thats a lil too much talkin...liek i prolly said b4, you gotta unique voice, its tite...good emotion....nice delivery....flow is okay but falls off in spots...lyrics are good....pretty good for such a short piece...keep it up...

*im commenting on the overall song, not the topic*

rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...673#post2692673

Meh, I don't like either one of your voices. Stops way too abruptly, at least go with the hook one more time. It was ok, but you really need to start stepping your game up now man if you want to emerge.

Ayo! Lemme get this beat. Shit is dope yo. :)

DC's back?...i never thought Doncaster was even here???

i heard Mad Dog in there...that's not very nice now is it?

the worst fucking excuse ever wow, anyway, i still really hate your voice, the beat is not bad, flow is good, had some good and bad punchlines, mmm not really your best, peace