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Nick Knack 03-18-06 09:34 AM

Voted For: twenty9

29:
you need to up your shit. you had some ok conceptz, but you fucked it up with your wording. the bald line could have been a lot better. work on making effective punchez.

jc:
you almost had this, but ya punchez didnt hit hard enough. when i saw the starz i figured there was a personal, instead you were just explainin some eazy and simple punch. work on makin good personalz.

v- 29

dazy 03-18-06 12:17 PM

uppin fo votes................................ shit ...........................

twenty9 03-18-06 05:25 PM

uppin............................................. ...................................

Nucentz 03-21-06 04:41 AM

Voted For: twenty9

yo both your rhymes were gud im learn alot from both verses but my vote goes to twenty 9 sho some love vote on my battles

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

scanz 03-21-06 10:28 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

ok my vote goes 2, structure was ok on both of them. (lil better 29) but the punches were better on jc.s on 29s those punchs could b used for lots of ppl. fairy and wild cherry. hmmmm nver saw the dude but im sure it looks like jc. anyways vote= jc.

oh yea 29. that post for gleen thing didnt come up so that didnt help much.

dazy 03-21-06 10:38 PM

thats for the vote scanz......................................

Young_law 03-21-06 10:57 PM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
wow............................................... ....................

Young Blaze 03-22-06 11:46 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

You’re just a bitch, that’s what I am telling them,
u a pussy, you wont even start medelling with glenn/**

Vs
9 third time ur facing me, both other times, me 2-0
i'll beat some sense into u & knock off that cheap afro*
u talk like u know everything but ur dumb as shit
ur just like when ur in a fight, u throw a punch and u still can't hit**

V/Jc.....this was a close one but real came wit more consistent punchs that were harder hittin than twenty....good battle....RTF...In my sig...Or this will be removed

(X)eed 03-23-06 04:58 PM

Voted For: JC REAL



IP:

quick drop cus im gone all week.........

29 third time ur facing me, both other times, me 2-0
i'll beat some sense into u & knock off that cheap afro*
u talk like u know everything but ur dumb as shit
^^^
prtt weak opner..... but beats tha other fella... .

had better flow.. alot better punches.. tha other fella.... u jus need 2 wrk alot harder..

ur punches are weak as fuck.... no offence ai... just keep at it

dazy 03-23-06 10:06 PM

upppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnn fo votez............................

dazy 03-29-06 06:37 PM

uppin the mafuckin up................................................ ........

Valerie 03-29-06 09:37 PM

rofl twent got owned by a herb...... LMFAO :bored:

CRiSS-CROSS 03-29-06 11:28 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

rofl rofl rofl im voting on this battle because it made me laugh to hard that both verses sucked so bad.. dont use real life personals, because u have 2 explain them, and explaing your battle is gay, i should be able to . think of some not played out concepts and tap some multis into in jeez. jc real got this because i wanted to shoot myself in the head when i weant 29s.

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