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AutoMATIK™ 04-26-06 06:39 PM

Voted For: Castro

Didnt really anjoy this battle.
... But Castro gets my vote.

He had more punches,it flowed better,and 'some' of his shit was original.

And im not a big fan of people who write explanations after the verse,even though this aint a real head 2 head battle,if ya'll ever do try to battle somewhere off the net,you dont get a 3min explanation time after the battle. So try to keep it as realistic as possible.

Wordz AhGod 04-27-06 01:26 PM

thats a retarted vote. I only explained it all becouse some people vote on personals that have actuall facts behind them. every thing I say on my verse has some sort of truth behind it. I could really care less wat ur a fan of. just try to explain a lil better next time. if u gotta battle u'd like me to vote on...just drop a link.

Castro... 04-28-06 12:58 PM

.. upin for some mroe votes.......................

Ysdat 04-28-06 05:04 PM

Voted For: Castro

very weak battle from both sides.

EyeDentdy;

u been waiting to battle me ...fuck it...I dont mind the facts...
cuz Im so raw...this nigga castro....had to hide his stats...

Very weak opener, not really a punch anywere in sight. Its a personal,but its weak bro.

its T.O.N. all day...yeah buddy...right on...
but uh...u only 15 dawg....so go get a permission slip befor u sighn on...
you cant spell.

cuz wat kind of nigga request 2880 minutes after check just to write his raps?
the type of nigga whose aveture looks like he trying to fight off rats...

slight personal again, and again cant spell.

cuz "up till this point" I aint know who the fuck you was...
till I heard u need to have AIM sex just to get ur dick sucked....

Weak, not even a punch.

dawg lol...u broke up wit a girl that u aint never even met...
but u only 15 though...so...its ok, since u aint hit puberty yet...

meh, better than other attempts at punches but nothing great.\

so go outside and get some sun...today...leave the net early....
cuz 3698 post on a website really just can't be healthy...

didnt rhyme,weak closer. didnt help your verse


Castro;
I’m so sick, straight ill, Doc said my sickness was more than contagious
Makin him have “EyeDentdy” crisis like a mentally retarded patient

decent opener. Good play on his name.

Talk about patient, shit I’m the one that was patience
You was probably prewritin so much wit all the time you was wastin

Ok attempt at wordplay, but could of [played it out a bit better.

You’s a butt ass nigga all you fuckin do is duck
Shit I’m a bout to just tell you just battle me and shut the fuck up

didnt really get this bar, seen as he was the one who made the thread.lol

You’s a fake ass nigga, claimin you born in the Bronx around drugs and cops *
Closest you ever been near drugs and cops was wit ya moms and pops

meh, this is weak.

Cuz ya mom’s a crack head ho and ya dad’s a straight up pig
You and the life you live is the same both a straight up bitch
Tell you the truth you aint street, come in my hood and get knocked down
You’s probably some fat fuck pot head on the comp. straight on “lock” down **
these four bars didnt end your verse well. but seen as you opponent dropped weak. you just scrapped through.

Valerie 04-28-06 05:17 PM

This was feedback posted for EyeDentdy
 
.................peepin the polls......................

Wordz AhGod 05-03-06 05:29 PM

are u for real? 1 - 3. and the verses aint wak either. I dont spell check shit...are u actually taking points for that? be real in this shit. every battle ya'll vote on... u try and make it sound like u the illest mu fuckas on the net by saying that every things wak and shit. if the battles are so wak...dont vote.

Castro... 05-25-06 10:18 PM

.. upin for some mroe votes.......................

Castro... 06-01-06 09:42 PM

.. upin for some mroe votes.......................

TEK-NIK 06-02-06 01:22 AM

Voted For: EyeDentdy

vote: eye

more creative castro you need to elevate
likes the verses but i think eye came a little bit harder

TEK-NIK 06-02-06 01:23 AM

hit my battles up you dont gotta vote jus check em out

The Creator 06-02-06 04:54 PM

This was feedback posted for EyeDentdy
 
checking the pollzz..................................

Castro... 07-02-06 03:04 PM

.. upin for some mroe votes.......................

Wordz AhGod 07-03-06 11:33 PM

why bother dawg. my verse dont make much sence since u changed ur av man. lol. fuck it. uppin for this old ass shit.

Castro... 08-16-06 02:42 PM

uppin.......................










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Spartacus. 08-16-06 03:36 PM

Voted For: EyeDentdy

I think Castro's verse was better here....His verse had harder punches and flowed well so it was able to read....wordplay was good and your verse needed less explaining.


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