This was feedback posted for David Lama
 

............................checkin the polls David........

word. up for votes ..................................................

Voted For: David Lama

I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
played n weak wordplay
My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
no
Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
eh
Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
ok
Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off.
no

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
eh
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
ok
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
eh
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
ok
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel
eh

Lama had two ok bars, Tempa had one. This wasn't a great battle but Lama got this by one bar.

v/ David Lama

Uppin for votes.....................................

This was feedback posted for David Lama
 

Lmao @ all nameplays owning this battle.

Voted For: David Lama

Lama

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
nice opener
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
ok nameplay
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
heh, cool
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
decent nameplay again
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel
good closer

Tempa:

I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
no, bad opener
My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
wack..
Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
no punch
Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
wording is bad, you cant expect to say whole bunch of shit that somewhat relates and think its a well-worded punch
Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off.
weak..

V-Lama, for obvious reasons

good looks. .................................................. ...............

come on people.................................................... ...............

The pain the agony..lol get it over with lol. Uppin.
Fuck text lol...*Retires the Pad and opens cool edit*
Ahhh, much better.

^^^^up for votes .................................................. .............

Temp, if your happy to close it just post the link in battle closings and it will be closed early.

Voted For: David Lama

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
EHH ALRIGHT

he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
LOL

my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
AIGHT

fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
LOL
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel
...NOT FEELIN IT


I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
WAAAACK

My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
DEAR GOD...DUDE,STOP THE QUOTES IMMEDIATE,ITS FUCKIN GAY
N UR WORDPLAY? IS FUCKIN GARBAGE

Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
SUCKS

Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
WACK

Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off.
....ALL IT DID WAS RHYME,THERE IS NO PUNCH

WITHOUT FURTHER EXPLANATION
VOTE=DAVID LAMA