This was feedback posted for Algebra
 

lol jus one sided...algeb got pwned.....checkin polll....

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ok....

basically...OSB had some nice wordplay n what not..

Algebra..

no wordplay
no multies
inconsistent punches....nothing really stood out here


OSB cam with some nice personals...which hit hard


so basically...votes goes to OSB for...

punches : osb
personals: osb
multies: osb
wordplay: Osb

osb just kinda dominated this...i dont think i have to explain much more

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

OSB took this...dont feel like posting feedback...sry!

Ok....... Just fucking vote, you dicks. I mean, please.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ay.. OSB... got this one.. that was a dope ending.. more good choice of vocab than mentor's...

This was feedback posted for Algebra
 

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Your opener doesn't make sense unless his name is zack. Nowhere in this thread does it say his name's zack, but w/e I guess it is. Widden is spelled Widen, that fucked up the flow. Other than that, you had some decent punches. tyr to be as creative in all your shit as you were in the pro zack lines.

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...You lost this. I mean, you seriously got thrashed.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

one sided.


closure comparism:

The more we figure you out the deeper you get? That’s somethin' supreme,
But true, cause the more I realize you're wack, the farther above you i seem..
vs
your worried cuz your a faggot not a man
with hair more curly than old ass Ragedy Ann


both closers are weak, but Kirk out done his opponent in this in every way possible.