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Voted For: GKillaz05

I wasn't really feelin this battle but i would have to go with Gkilla on this one. I didn't really have any notables though, a bunch of near misses but both seemed a bit played. The best would proly be the pizza delivery personal, the poopa scoopa punch was pretty lame to me and the soup punch was ehhh. But troop's best to me was his mime punch which was weak to me, cause making fun of canada's played. we all know canada's wack:thumbup: just joking but seriously though.....


v/Gkilla


rtf on this

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=225369

This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
 

Get back in the loop bro..

This shit might be called good two years ago..

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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 

[Lucky Luciano]
Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif
This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs
^^meh, nothin hard hitting, attempted personal...2/5
Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks
.............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax
^^nope...not feeling at all, and you contradicted the first line of this bar by sayin his Audio lacks then sayin you never heard his audio...1/5
And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep
Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet
^^decent ending, another personal attempt...strongest bar....3/10

overall 6/15...work on mulites(multiple rhyming words in one line), similies(make your punches much more complex), both of those would make your personals stronger

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[Gkilla]
I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me...
Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery...
^^nah, not feeling...pizza shop/delivery line is played...1/5
While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic...
Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'...
^^nope, again not feeling...elementary rhymes 1/5
Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop...
kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup...
^^your best, but not strong...2/5

overall 4/15...you need just as much elevation as the other guy. Multies, Similies, personals...the only thing you two had was structure and flow...but meh...weak battle

vote = Lucky

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Voted For: GKillaz05

strayt battle, I liked it.... close, real close. Luciano came out strayt, bars was in tact, but sum of his punches were hard to get. GK punches were a lil harder though, flowed a lil better (bothe flows could been a lil better)... but overall ya bothe did a goode job. not ya best wurks but I was feelin it... gotta hand it over to GKillaz05