20 Lines?
Why Not Do 10Lines...No More No Les?... |
Voted For: TEK-NIK
Ya rhymes a mystery,put the peices together,its worth the trouble .....Whackness is'nt a peice or your life ...its the whole fuckin puzzle vs. basically nothing those were just blindly aimed insults,hypnotc needs to up his game for real...sorry rtf on this link http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=225369 |
Voted For: TEK-NIK
oh my fucking god....here is how it goes...I'lll break it down.... Call me King Cronus, I destroy herbs who show slowness N' I'll put so much Moss on ya body the raiders'll give ya a signing bonus FIRST LINE WAS WAK AND NOT A GOOD OPENER...2ND WAS OK BUT NEEDED WORK.... You ain't higly regarded, punk ya fuckin' retarded Fuck Wal-Mart, bitch ya lame punches ain't even on Target 1ST LINE WAS JUST A FILLER....2ND WAS GOOD... Ya rhymes a mystery,put the peices together,its worth the trouble .....Whackness is'nt a peice or your life ...its the whole fuckin puzzle GOOD 1ST LINE...IT SET HIM UP FOR THE CLOSER... NICE. Yo Tek, Your Rhymes Are A Wreck, Your Rhymes Anit Trec* Your Raps Are Lame, Your Shit, My Rhymes Break Ya Neck WAK......... Yo Nik, Step Away From Da Mic, You Think Your Good But Its A Trick You Think You Sick, But Your Slick**, Your Just A Little Boy Without A Dick WAK........... Yo, Ya Lame, Your Never Gonna Get Into Fame, Never Gonna Reach Ya Aim WAK............ Your Lyrics Dissapear Like A Burnt Out Flame, Your Just A Shame. WAK WAK WAK............... Tek gets this easy cuz hyp dont know how to battle at all. yo take the time to vote on one of the battles on my sig. |
thanks for the votes uppin ....
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Eh, I Lost My Skillz :(.............................
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sorry for free posting but can I get an honest vote in a battle in my sig...
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uppin for more votes fuckin 50 charactor shit blah
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Lmfao.....................Its So early............
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Voted For: TEK-NIK
Well,easy call here... TeK-NiK got it.Only one was the 4th line.The Target thing,I'm pretty sure I've seen before.So that was played. But the rest was good.I esspeccially like the Moss/Raiders thing. As for Hypnotic.To me,it' seems as though you were just rhyming words,and nothing else.It had very little content what so ever.And that one that said "your a little boy without a dick"..<---SOOOOOO CHESSY and Lame. Vote-Tek Nik |
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hay I voted on this battle....do u mind voting honestly on mine and if u do....try to drop a legit vote cuz this dude thinks I got Dick riders and will try to dq every one who votes for me untill the entire site has voted and there is no one left to dq.....lol...heres the link...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492 |
Voted For: TEK-NIK
Well all in all, both verses to me were quite played. Yet it's better to have a few played punchlines (as Tek-Nik) did than to have none (as Hypnotic did). Hypnotic: What's up with that first punchline nigga? Made absolutely NO sense. Shit was like fuckin' nursery rhymes. You on that Hickory Dickory Dock shit... Tek-Nik: Yo, ya opening lines were alright, no lie. But Tell me why: Quote:
-Did you have to kill it with this line. Never in your life should you make references to discount megastores again. |
Voted For: TEK-NIK
Tek got this one.... hypnotic- ur punches were fair, but flow was haphazard... tek had sick punces, like the Target line, and flowed well... |
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