imagery is a literary term that can boost the quality of a piece of writing. that's all son. so to suggest that you're better than me is an opinion you're simply throwing out there. your commenting of my shit is your choice. i've had thousands of better feed on all of my work so i highly doubt i'm "lucky" to have your ass comment on a piece i wrote a year ago when your feed is based on "imagery". and elevate? i'm laugin' at that. this piece didn't flop because it was lacking imagery, it didn't have it, so you felt like "oh he's not a good writer because there's no imagery, yup."...thanks for that laugh. this entire ordeal is hilarious.

thanks, up-in-your-girl^

wow.
This is why RV doesnt learn anymore,cause they drop text peices, in a open mic forum,were the purpose is to get feedback on how to get better. But when told what a person see's lacking,they feel that there peice is allready perfect.

And yes, i am a better writer than you, dont belive? setup a topical battle. :thumbup: