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ayo . audrey 06-28-06 12:03 AM

aight this is entirely constructive criticism, so dont be shittin ya draws or nothin'.

1st one..
-not feelin the yellow, more colors woulda done it well especially since from what i can see, it's a beach.. i don't know why it's all color deprived and shit.

-the text, KINDA, just a bit, clashes, nothing serious though, i can live with it.

-not feeling the mixtape text on the bottom as well, clashes with the parental advisory


2nd one..
-onec again my dude, whassup with this single colored stuff

-not feeling the crown. everything would be ill with some color balance but then you got that ugly ass cartoon crown there.. annnnnnnnd... i think thats about it.. yup

[.:D:.] 06-28-06 02:58 AM

uhh...ok thanks

.Eternal. 06-28-06 04:45 AM

aiight first one
i aint feelin the font
the colors are yucky
looks like someone pissed all over this sheet of paper u handin out ahahah
overall not feelin it

2nd cover
i like that font
the crown shit i aint feelin tho
the bg is jus too blurry maybe make it more visible


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