This was feedback posted for tha_duke
 

im just fuckin around cuz i cant pick me a favorite,
i just felt like pointing out that this prick has darth vador lips,
its so major its, covering his face, or should i say it blankets it.....
why would you take the pic, you think it compliments ya eyes son?
when his dsl has me callin this kid verizon
n what kinda caged dog wears a cowboy belt and a blazer
that combo never worked like dr. evils laser
but on the real what kinda kid has to mark up all his quoteables
if its a quoteable arent others suposed to be quotein you?
ive met my quotent dude, specially when you full it, you foolish kid,
i do audio, but still ballin tho' im like a professor when i stay schoolin kids.....

i owned you haha, just cuz im bored

.................................................. ..

obviously spul aint popular here enymore.......
lol..
vote up........
uppin and bumpin.........
1..

Voted For: SPuL™

Aight yo this was actually a hot battle:

Make you 'Pay for your bars' like "saloon bills" cuz when i'm 'Mad, a-Gat-Scar (madagascar) like 'Cartoon Films"..
So go and act-hard , but cruise through my ville, and 'get blasted out the window' like 'car-tunes' we'll see
^^
The first 2 bars of that was tight liked the wordplay fo real and the concept, the second was weak and tired so fo dat 7/10

And like 'heavy metal chess' im 'rockin rooks' (rookies)..
Melt ya chest, drop spul n run, like 'gun-dodgin crooks', and then take ya head and "Wall It" like 'Pocket Books..!
^^
Aight decent not great tho, decent concept not executed well enough 5/10

"Murdered by 'Caged Dogs' da way u get 'mauled and killed wit a pen bitch'
Slap the taste out ya mouth, so we can 'see-spul-spit-sense'.. feed dude ten-clips, and cover 'his Pallet wit shells' Like "SeaFood-shipments"..
^^^
woahhh aight tht was crazyy haa, shit that was a sick line fam...likin the gun talk my typa ish..8/10

You'll get cut like i brought in a 'new-cast', when i leave ur 'tubes-slashed'
U gon burn dis newb-fast??. im a vet please I'm so tight on the mic I give him "Booth-Cramps.." and u can 'nazi my skills' like "German Bootcamps..."
^^
ehhhhh, concept nice, flowed tight, multis good, execution not good..6/10

Have a 'stabbin-frenzy' and 'put more shit through spul den B's rectum
Nobody respects him.. and in a battle its nothin to 'take a baby out' like "C-Sections..
^^^^
haha dat was tight fo real...nice line 9/10

You Plant 2 bury me? please! I'll have dis 'pussy' bleeding wit 'sanitary-needs'
So watch as these 'hits' 'r'ock his world' like planetary fiends, and make B-leave (make believe) like "Imaginary Trees"....!!!
^^^
dope closer ended nice..8/10

You stay with sticks and balls like lacrosse, you make me puke
The way I'm rapin' this bitch, it only fits that his name is Duke
^^
haha thats a funy line, nice opener 7/10

That second pic is pretty homo with you puckering up like that
I'd send an uppercut to your lip...
.........................................but I'm afraid it might fight back!
^^^
LMAOOOO hahaa damn lmaoo 9/10 ahha nice work with the pictures

So fall back, kid... damn, you're wack, I've had it
Spray shots to your body like Axe or Tag, kid
^^^
decent line...filler perhaps...6/10

So it's best you bag quick, cuz... I won't tell you later
You can try to step your game up, me, I'll take the elevator!
^^
haha yo shit is funny i like dat in a verse..nice hit on the elevator shit/..8/10

It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Markus?...
... hell nah, Mar, kus my ass!
^^^
haha nice word play funny again..9/10

Got your hat tipped up, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!^^^
lmfaoo haha 9/10 hot closer

Humor: Spul
Flow: Markus
Lyrics: Spul
Multis: Markus
Enjoyable: Spul

It was mad close but i think spul got this...1

Voted For: SPuL™

It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Markus?...
... hell nah, Mar, kus my ass!

vs.

nothing

fuck this other guys structure was all over the placed, and he was using played out lines, and executing it like a noob.

"but on the real what kinda kid has to mark up all his quoteables
if its a quoteable arent others suposed to be quotein you?"


owned that markus dude...vote/jay

This was feedback posted for SPuL™
 

lmao @ u rhymin puke with duke...

oh well ur winnin tho so g/l i guess.

Voted For: SPuL™

You stay with sticks and balls like lacrosse, you make me puke
The way I'm rapin' this bitch, it only fits that his name is Duke
decent opener
That second pic is pretty homo with you puckering up like that
I'd send an uppercut to your lip...
.........................................but I'm afraid it might fight back!
lmao
So fall back, kid... damn, you're wack, I've had it
Spray shots to your body like Axe or Tag, kid
not even I spray shots to his body, lol. :eek:
So it's best you bag quick, cuz... I won't tell you later
You can try to step your game up, me, I'll take the elevator!
okay
It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Markus?...
... hell nah, Mar, kus my ass!
nice nameplay hurr
Got your hat tipped up, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!
damn nice closer

vs

Make you 'Pay for your bars' like "saloon bills" cuz when i'm 'Mad, a-Gat-Scar (madagascar) like 'Cartoon Films"..
nerp
So go and act-hard , but cruise through my ville, and 'get blasted out the window' like 'car-tunes' we'll see
que?
And like 'heavy metal chess' im 'rockin rooks' (rookies)..
Melt ya chest, drop spul n run, like 'gun-dodgin crooks', and then take ya head and "Wall It" like 'Pocket Books..!
no
"Murdered by 'Caged Dogs' da way u get 'mauled and killed wit a pen bitch'
Slap the taste out ya mouth, so we can 'see-spul-spit-sense'.. feed dude ten-clips, and cover 'his Pallet wit shells' Like "SeaFood-shipments"..
ok
You'll get cut like i brought in a 'new-cast', when i leave ur 'tubes-slashed'
U gon burn dis newb-fast??. im a vet please I'm so tight on the mic I give him "Booth-Cramps.." and u can 'nazi my skills' like "German Bootcamps..."
nerp
Have a 'stabbin-frenzy' and 'put more shit through spul den B's rectum
Nobody respects him.. and in a battle its nothin to 'take a baby out' like "C-Sections..
ok
You Plant 2 bury me? please! I'll have dis 'pussy' bleeding wit 'sanitary-needs'
So watch as these 'hits' 'r'ock his world' like planetary fiends, and make B-leave (make believe) like "Imaginary Trees"....!!!
nah son

Battle wasn’t all that hurr. SPuL, I know you fool, and I know you didn’t try up in this biznitch. Punches were straight, couple were blah and the rest were good and landed though.

Duke, eh @ your structure.. and them punches, my god. Them shits don’t work here on RV or RB son, take that shit to hollafront. No offense, but I can be harsh, but fix your structure, and make your punches harder and make sure they land. Elevate more son...

yo wack fuck, get off my dick................ nobody cares what you're wack ass thinks.

lmfao.. your funny. man. but w/e .

yo w/e
man im feelin like i got b.s'ed man..

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
mmmmm

^yea, now you know how I felt on BWS son .

Voted For: SPuL™

Make you 'Pay for your bars' like "saloon bills" cuz when i'm 'Mad, a-Gat-Scar (madagascar) like 'Cartoon Films"..


vs


It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Markus?...
... hell nah, Mar, kus my ass!
You stay with sticks and balls like lacrosse, you make me puke
The way I'm rapin' this bitch, it only fits that his name is Duke



wtf is up with that structure marcuz?
also you need to stop explaining the punches within the lines
its not good wordplay if we cant figure it out for ourselves
spul you aint need the pic
those 2 bars were enough for the win

This was feedback posted for SPuL™
 

Voted For: SPuL™

spul got it. just feedback.... goos shit to both .