I still think this guy is playing around and is making things like this just to mess with RV.

Bad. How about this. Since you don't like RV, and we don't like you, and you're so much above us, why don't you go down the street rapping where nobodies who listen to mainstream and thing they're thugs go 'ooooh' everytime you rhyme 'boat' with 'float'.

Crazy Hades quit trying to be personal and critique th edamn post

It was aight, the rhyme structure was good no doubt...

Thanks Fo Rthe Props And Critique On This One For Real Yall

ok its not a bad topic to rap about..but it lacked in some departmetns ithnk multis.structure.....did have some lines that caught my eye other than that i felt it lackd..dont take the bad feed as hate cuz everybody aint gunna like wat u drop but take it was wat they give u work on the stuff they say u lackin at

thanks for the props and critique it over a hundred responses on this post right here yall nevr got this many responses on no other post