yup yup...


drop ur linx


:bored:

dunno if i like the beat....but u worked it pretty decent...not bad..

singing really isnt bad IMO..i think it could sound better with a better mix...and could be a lil more catchy with a better mix as well.......of course its not perfect..this singing could be a lil more polished...but still...not bad...


lyrics are pretty coo...can tell its coming from a personal deal..to your dad and all.....delivery not bad..

i DO like the verses though....i wish this was done in a pro studio...i think i'd like it tons more...flow is coo..

i honestly like this track...good shit

not really feelin the beat and the vocals on the singing were a lil off key...

but verse...flows cool...lyrics are deep...kinda old school flow...in a way im feelin it...i like the way you mixed some parts...i think wit better quality and more time taking into tracks (gettin active) you'd elevate quite quickly

but ye...keep droppin Yvey :thumbup:

sorry the RTF took time...

word up thanx...

singing is a lil flat....not bad tone but flat.....you shoulda calmed down on the rappin part....woulda worked with the beat, with a smooth chill style....the lyrics were deepish but not taht well constructed....production is good, your almost there, just a lil more focus n your good.....

rtf on myspace girls...

loL @ the singing sounds like some oprah shit. not that bad just need to double it and add some effects and better quality. and youd be Sick wit it

your rapping...umm its ok..but you should of switched the flow on the beat u know. But still its sick. im feelin it. and i like the concept. Good lyrics just need better flow and quality

6.8/10

lol..jay i already dropped mine b4 seeing ur feed..

hahaha...kony negro...wth oprah?...hahaha...iight iight


thanx y'all


collabs to come :thumbup:

aight. first time me checkin out ya work.




hook - sounds good. but i cant really hear it. its reaaaaaaal low. all i hear is the last note haha.


verse - low also. ya flow is not bad. first time i hear a chick on rv with a flow. so thats a plus. real surpriced actually.


other than the volume levels and maybe some mixing. track was not bad. always room for improvement, yahmean ?. keep droppin girl :)


return the feed when you get a chance ma
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476

ole!

thanx


i will def when i get back lata!