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cmon man you aint gonna rtf in my battle thats fucked up ...really
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Voted For: GKillaz05
His punches were harder i think, nice flow..and words a god felt.. like he was tryin too hard..forcing his shit...nice battle tho Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I was about to Oz, but then I realized that I just joined up with N.O.K. today, so I cant return the fav, sorry mayne.
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
peepin the polls and i think g's got this one hands down.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
VOTE G I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent If you battling legends. . . . . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent ok but self glory didnt help In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em' I would drop more personals . . . . . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em' you should have droped more personals alywas helps... so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers the only time you killing G's. . . huh?? . . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other 'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th ok you aint the 1 -2 champ, but you can get knocked by a pro So understand you not original. . . . . . I checked, he logg'd off a few minutes ago mehh... G's verse IP: Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house ahh.. ok i guess theres a simile in there makin it bettter you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists ok GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt self glory I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses meh I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch aight..' yea yea i vote G |
u broke my lines down wrong...oh well. w/e uppin...
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how are they supposed to be broken down then.... ill redo it.. dont really matter it was all still self glory and nothing hard hitting.... show me how you want it done ill do it....?
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Its cool dawg. dont really matter. it just that my verse goes something like:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx. . . . . . xxxxxxxxxxxxxx 1 bar xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx. . . . . . xxxxxxxxxxxxx 2 bar you broke one of my lines down like xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx. . . ^but you left out the last part of that bar. thats all. your feed back was str8 and adequate enough. |
haha no i didnt ... i broke it down right liek this...
I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent If you battling legends. . . . . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent ^ ^ ok but self glory didnt help i believe thats right .. but its dont matter i voted.. it was a good cloce battle...word |
so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers
the only time you killing G's. . . huh?? [B] Im talking a bout part ^ u was confused coz you didn't read it right but I would have still caught the L from your vote regardless so its str8 [B/] . . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other 'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th ok |
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