haha akon ^. thanks man. really appreciate the feed. im down for w/e :).

thanks nygma :shoot: :shoot: ..



and good looks bishop..


leave ya'll links if you want some feed :hump:

my momz said she loves this joint she added it to her ipod LMFAO *thumbsup*

omg...

lol..my heart is beating fast..

this was quite touching...mad time...

beat was perfect for the topic...yeah ur presence was str8 ok..

did u sing the hooks?...boy u mad got a lovely voice if that was u...

quality was tight...nothing went wrong mayne...ur flows were dope as well...

props...and i wish u mad luck!

this was a good song only thing negative i could point out is the line where you say time to be a man you come in a little too loud thats all really lol
flow loved your flow you switched it up throughout the whole song which was dope and kept me interested
your chorus is amazing you sing better than any male to hit rv and female for that matter really lol chrous was definately felt

i liked all 3 verse but i felt the 3rd one more i mean i cant imagine what its going to be like leaving my sisters
your delvery and emotion were all good too props i think this is the best song to hit rv i downloaded it :)

this shit is sick man.....really feelin tha track.....graduated this year too.......flow wuz nice.......tha singin wuz good too...liked how u peiced together ya story man........this shit is nice........

pz

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now i know who u sound like Ahmad of pharcyde like that back in the day song he did.....both verses was cool they flowed real well theres really nothing bad i can say but ur vox seemed a lil loud n i do think u should dubed ya verses...the hook was aight but it seemed sumthing was missing overall nice drop....word :thumbup:

playing...feeling the beat.
intros cool. anything from the heart is dope.
flows cool, emotion is nice. Lyrics are cool bro.

Hooks nice man, fucking solid track bro.


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233055

damn...this is a cold as joint...I like your flow a lot..real hot...lyrics was nice n ur singin was good on the hook. Real nice...Few minor flaws, but still really hot shit.

good looks yo ^.. appreciate it man.

damn like everyone else said, this is a hott track.

Although everything was on point I think what really made this track was the emotion you had on it. Lyrics were meaningful and good. Your quality is really nice.

Singing was very good too. Damn theres really nothing wrong with this song. I think i'll have to DL it too. Keep the great work up man.

k..typing as I listen...beat is corny lol but works with what u spitting bout...okay back to old dubless calam, delivery wise you on point...I can tell coming from a real place...hook is tight, can tell momma had you on the choir lol. flow is on point jus held same one too long in verse 1, verse 2 same thing good flow but its unchanging...delivery still on point...this beat an subject really befits you tho...this is borderline christian rap...if you made a rap video...I see you spitting to ya family in church while they watch from the pews...but this is real son an u hit the nail on the head where you needed it most which was emotion. I feel where you comign from son, def can relate to what you saying...an thats the key to making hit songs....establishing some type of connection with the listener an you did it hear. Keep it up man, smoothe introspective shit is where you shien fo real....1

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233115