^word appreciate it yo

up for a lil more !_!

uppin' for a lil more .

Whats Hot:Ya flow and lyrix is coo
The beat is fire

Whats coo:The Hook is iight..
your prescense and emotion
multies are nice

Whats iight:Ya delivery in certain spots

Whats Not:The way u didnt pronounce some words fully
kinda like ya mouth got wet and didnt come out righ
i do the same shit lol

this was hot bro...im feelin u more on original beats
lol..ima try that shit...

8/10

Keep droppin boi

listening...

beat is coo, quality is good too...

flow is is on point for this verse, kinda got an eminem type delievery with it, like the bouncy vocals on the flow.... anyway good shit.... hook is pretty good here too....2nd verse also good shit, yea the style reminds me alot of eminem......same for the 3rd verse.... real consistent verse... alot of times people start fallin off in the later verses as far as lyrics...

anyway pretty good shit... was feelin it

^word appreciate it man...thanks

This was BEAST.

Let me first just say that the beat was awesome. And the delivery of the track was amazing. I remember back when I listened to that M.A.S. shit that you dropped and OMG!! you sounded so gay at times on the mic. But, in this track you have improved a lot. You are more in sync with the beat, flowing a lot better and I think that you've got the pitch of your voice down nice.
I don't know, before it was like you was patchy in places... and listening to you, I could pick up on your vocals level of volume rising and falling slightly... and I fucking hate that. But, in this track you were consistent from beginning to end. And lyrically, the track was fucking MONSTER. Although, my one minor gripe... or actually when you consider it, it is a little major... there were a couple of spots in the track where your voice was drowned out by the beat... you may want to take a look at that. Because this track is ILL... and for the parts where you can clearly here your voice it is ILLNESS... and so, with a bit of tweaking and modification this track could be fucking selling, nah'mean.

^word appreciate feedback man

damnnnnnnnnnn


lol

aight aight.... i love this beat mayne.... for real.... your confidence on the mic is improving.... delivery is some of your best.... flow as well.....

BIG SP... doing it mayne.... tracks got good vibes.... keep this shit up

8.7/10



-Don T

Typing as I listen...spul learned how to do a smoothe intro...thats wassup...opened strong...delivery is the most noticeable improvement..def the most emotion you've shown but its still laidback...so u stayed within ya range but kept it interesting...you flowed the same through whole verse tho...thats is a 8 bar swtich beat...if you switched on 9th bar to a completely different flow woulda mad this even better....hook is tight...haha u used the spl its in the game...I need to start charging mothafuckas for catch phrases...ok second verse u open wit same flow but ya energy is so right I am loving ya delivery....u switch flow towards end but its same flow with a different emphasis on the rhyme words...third verse same as other two great energy jus needed a flow switch here an there...really only gripe I got is u held flow too long..I def like this new flow u got now jus swtich it up give the listener some variety....beat is tight fo sho...hook is hitting...aside from the lack of flow changes an slight pronounciation slips here an there very few though...oh an mix coulda been aliil stronger u need to eq ya vocals..to really bring every nuance of ya voice out an have it sit in the mix better cuz right now it kida sits on top of the beat witht he vol adjusted so u can still hear beat instead of fitting in the mix of the instruments...but still a very enjoyable joint I listened twice...good shit MAJOR!!!!elevation with this jumpoff....1