LMAO.... k uppin 4................................................. .....

Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN

V/influentialwun

But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil
Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne
Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil


vs.

nothing

v/influential wun


lyrical...try and incorporate better punches dog ur just using fillers and garbage....influential..u had some bullshit stuff in ur verse too but it was enough to get u the win.....

rtf on my battle please dog............................

ok.. hahaha if you say so...
i just dont think that rappin about sprayin nines and shit is
even worth it casue thst not really "DISSING"
thats trying to act hard.. but ok thanks for voting on the battle dawg.. last up

^^well ur right..

but the thing is...u didnt really have ne quotable punches..i just wasnt feeling them ya know? i felt you lacked creativity in your verse..im not hating..just telling u.
and ur opponent..although talked tough..and thats kind ehhh...but it was still somewhat of a punch compared to what you had.....but a vote is just an opinon..and thats what i gave

no hate...and theres more feed to my vote.

uppin... .

^rtf dawg......with an honest vote my shtis in the sig..get 1 more post and rtf

yea i need 20 posts kidd..
Ill vote by tommrow.......

rtf kid...wut u think this is??????????????????????

Voted For: Lyrically Gifted

You Might Be Gifted But Lyrically Im Sick
Have Tha kid Runnin his mouth..no no dont trip
WAK

Cause if you trip my Gunz Bust Quick Like A Virgin Dick
Kid called me out but pulled a no show
YOUR BARS ARE FUCKED UP...IT SHOULD BE 2 LINES NOT 3.

Ill pull a quick punch and hit you with some bright lights
See's them lights alot...when he talks to the PoPo
WAK

Cause where im from..thats a major NO..N0
Im coming with that maraculous flow off tha dome
WAK

But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil
Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne
WAK

Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil
You shouldnt of came to a gunfight with a Knife....
Cause it only takes WUN bad INFLUENCE to fuck up your life..
WAK

BASICALLY YOU HAD NOTHING.

Ok 1. how you throw a personal,Kid dont know me like a stanger
you can take your krusty punchs,ill bend'em like coat hangers
WAK

ill throw'em in tha garbage casue thats what your shit is worth
This cat aint punchin , you slappin like a bitch with a phurse
OK PUNCH BUT IT WAS REALLY WEAK

now i know i herd worse but you infleunce on us is bad
if we took after this kid 0 is as many wins as we would have
POORLY WRITTEN, VERY POORLY

no lies im spittin, casue by kids record i can tell hes no veterin
all you throwin homie is newspapers call ya self a letter man
WAK

you set this man, so i guess your just lookin to be murked
You can try bitin and recyclin ya lines but it still ain gunna work
FILLER LINES WITH NO PUNCHES

leave you decieced amoung dirt with lyrics that creace ya ability
im spittin so hot that i could use my words as heavy artilary
GLORIFICATION & FILLER
ill call you hillary casue you rapp soft like a rich hoe with no style
thinks hes gunna drop a verse hot liek fire i think Infleuentalwun is C-Nile(crazy)
WAK

BASICALY, YOU HAD ONE GOOD LINE WHICH REALLY WASN'T THAT GOOD. I DONT KNOW WHY BUT i EXPECTED MORE FROM THIS BATTLE. OH WELL.

i GIVE THIS BATTLE TO LG FOR THAT ONE DECENT LINE HE HAD AND PLUS THE FACT HE MADE MORE ATTEMPS AT A PUNCH BUT YOU BOTH IS WAK ON THE REAL. ELEVATE MAN.

Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN

structure: Influence-both were kinda hard to follow
metas:influence
punches:both
creativity: influ
personal:LG
overall I say iflu took it

This was feedback posted for InfLuEnTiaLWuN
 

influentialwun tore his ass up out tha frame! Betta punch lines and I like the way he used both mcees name in the verse

Well if you liked it why not vote........

rtf lol.............................................

UPPIN.......

Come on people this shit has been open mad long ..vote