i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
nice wordplay


look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
decent shit


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
ehh

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
ok

overall I think That this was a good battle th best Ive read so far and I think it goes to

V/ Untold

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
~~LOL..WHAT?..No man No..~~

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
~~Lol..this was pretty nice serb~~
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I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
~~U had the win..and fucked it up righ there~~

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
~~Lol..nice way 2 finish~~

Untold u started out sloppy wit a shitty ass punch
then u finished it pretty strong..good closer
left me with a lasting impression

Serb..u also came out swingin hard..u had the lead
but your 2nd punch was so ass it blew it
gotta come more consistent

v/Untold

Man.

Do you guys even get the word play on the 2nd punch?

ok, i wasn't feeling untolds first punch really ..it was ok at best for me. his second punch was pretty tiight though. Serbs first punch was good too, but then his second punch just didn't seem worded good enough, it was missing something for me and didn't really come direct at all.

both did good, but i'd say untold was a bit more consistant

v. Untold

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
-Lol nice wordplay hit hard-
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
-Good humor nd hard hitting shit-

vs.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
-okaay lol good punch funny-
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I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
-meh coulda been more creative-

v/untold coming wittier and more consistant with his punches

1

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
ehh too simple. decent
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
ok.... not bad

v.s.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
ehh it's aiight
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
ehh nah, i get what you tryin' to say, but didn't connect

weak battle. Untold came ehh, didn't come his harded. But his last punch was pretty cooish. Serbness was aiight. He had right ideas, just struggled to word them nice. So I got untold winning this by a bit

v/Un

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
- cool at best...dont kno, was missin something
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
- lol, dope.....liked this

vs.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
- im sure Ive ready something similar, but yeh...this was nice, funny
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I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
- nah, dont like this

I got Untold winning this, was better overall

Vote - Untold

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike

i like the wordplay..but not feelin it as far as a punch...if you want to win..a tie shouldn't be possible...i also sensed sort of a personal there..cause the dude is obviously obsessed with mike tyson

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from

you fed from his last punch...so..you sort of contradicted yourself...but..it's still a good punch


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him

stupid

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one

does he have one?? i feel like if you said you'll get yours for being one...would be more effective..because..unless he really has a scar..it's pretty pointless..decent punch still

v/UNTOLD... i liked the ethiopian line serb...but untold came with 2 decent to good punches..you had 1

Untold WINS 1-2
Serbness LOSES 2-1