Listen'n

Lol wit the verizon joint dog i gots verizon too....stay in the network...

1st: Lyrics is dope yo...on some real shit though u need to get a lil more comfortable on the mic...but its coo...flow was ok, for this joint...delivery was aight coulda bin upped...i think ur presence coulda bin upped more too...coulda bin more aggressive too... u was dissin someone right!?! but u did ur thing fam...

HoOk: Coulda bin done differently so its ok...But suited the point u was gettin acrosss

2nd: I didnt like ur flow on this lol...i dont know maybe its just me homie but u sounded kinda funny....but at the same time it seemed real cocky....but ur delivery was there...along wit the presence more punchlines too which i like that my dude...quality was ok...u coulda done some things different...lyrics was dope though... :thumbup:

HoOk: Same

Over-all
Nice track my dudes...mixin was off a lil bit...but hey u only get better wit mo' practice...but other than 9th u had crazy punchlines better than shaolin...but shaolin had the better presence in a sense either way y'all made a soild track...an good creativity for the intro an outro lol....wit the cell phone voice mail....my ratin 8.5/10 keep droppin y'all holla at yo boy..1 :thumbup:

intro with the voicemails is different. thats cool.

first verse is hot. i like that laid back style. lyrics were hot. flow was cool as well. didnt fall off too much from what i heard

the hook sucks. honestly there is nothing cool about it

second verse the best thing about that was the lyrics. mic prescence was weak. but you had some pretty cool lyrics


overall this song was alright. it wouda been much better with a different chorus

hey can you rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545

soundclick seems to be down, I'll get at this later

Dude you performed this song for me the other day remember...or maybe you were drunk but either way i already listened to it. The flow for both was okay, i didn't really care for a whole lot of the punches, then again i was present for alot of you guys battles at school. Hard to compare, chorus was ok. The intro and outro were pointless to me since you couldn't make the dude look anymore like a bitch than he already is. Yea RTF on the track i'ma have up soon. Peace like whoa

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...264#post3072264 RTF LIKE WHOA YO

*listening*

the beat is pretty nice.. a lil low in the back, but it's coo.

lmao @ the chorus............

the intro.. can hardly hear & same w/ the outro.

the lyrics were nice.. coo diss. had a lil somethin like this before, but anywayz this track was pretty coo, liked it.

good shit yo. liked both verses.

Word.....this was good for a diss track man. Punches were there from both dudes. And like I told you 9th, just raise the vocals up a bit and you'd be good man....

Nice shit poopyhead :thumbup: