RapVerse.com Community - Lyricly Gifted vs M. Tav

OOPS SORRY I MESSED UP HERE IS MY FULL EXPLAINATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im so fast with the flow leavin some tongues twisted
Your Spelling wrong lyricly, so shows your ungifted
^^ Decent 6/10
I missed it, the part were you said that you would win it
you didnt, my flow so fast its swiping up your women (wi min)
^^ Flows nicley with The first line

You think you got the fire, but your shit's so bad so
he's prolly talking bout his avy when he says he has hoes
^^ Decent personal. could use creativity

SO sad bro, your back's broke, with flow so slick
I flick little bitch hoes like the bro so quick
^^ I really dident get what you ment so i
really cant give you educated feedback bro

with more clicks to spare i dont care shows over
the day that you beat me's the day i go sober
^^ This line was funny 7/10

M.Tav set up da battle like he was gonna win/
lets see if his weak lines pay off n the end/
^^ Pretty basic 6/10

u dont have a win n dont think its gonna change/
u can tell dis dude sux just look at his name/
^ Dident make sence,what does his name have to do with it
overall 4/10 lacks creativity

im gonna murder dis cat n just ten lines/
he gonna send me messages sayin teach me how to rhyme/
Yes, your verse is 10 lines... decent past tense
basic ryme scheme.....5/10

he not gonna be satisfied till' he layin in a coffin/
my bullets will leave him headless like he was the horsemen/
^ Nice punch i liked it, keep workin on those 7/10

to take a W i dont even need this last line/
its your turn pussy make sure u take ur time
^^ ha ha explains why your rap was so basic
an aswsome way to end by explaing your verse so simply 9/10

Over all im giving the win to M tav. i felt he had more creativity and
i could stick with the flow

Lyrically gifted ive been looking at your work and your definatley
elevating, keep it up bro and you will be sicc wit it....

Well im out
Rtf if you wish