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yo...
Your girls a slut. No lie, I mean it guy She known for takin' in a foot.. .. and I ain't talkin' bout penis size! ..this was aiight. could'a been more harsh, but not a bad opener.. Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids ..pretty cool. this wasn't bad.. Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze ..this was dope. i like it alot.. So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line She like dominoes.. .. she'll go down one at a time! ..eh.. aiight, could'a been better, maybe?.. You know I'm lovin' this dime, cuz she a damn good rider man Makin' me spray out that stringy stuff, like I was spiderman ..lolz. aiight, but just a funny punch really.. But enough of that bitch, with chicks, I'm upright and center And nah, I ain't a bum<-- that's just where I'm gon enter ..this was pretty dope. that dooky luv, nigga.. No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period ..not bad. wordins a lil off to me, but cool.. I'm a master in this pimp shit. Wooing the dames I pull so many tricks... ... that I put Houdini to shame ..yea! niceness here.. I do this pimp shit on my own. Never taught to act I throw out better game, then MVP quarterbacks ..cool, but could've used a lil more wordin for a better effect.. Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action ..roflz! r.kelly ass nigga! this was funny man.. Ladies fall to my feet, I got their hearts and I can bet.. The way everyone digging this mac... .. Microsoft's starting to sweat ..lolz. it's a cool concept, but i dunno. cool anywayz.. Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio ..lolz, creative but could'a been better imo.. Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick Who kept my name in her mouth all night... ... I guess she mistook me for a Dick ..yea, it's aiight. but not my fav line.. I'ma pimp, while you a homo, son. We all know that's a fact I ram the pussy till they need first aids<-- while that's what you'll contract ..dope! this was an illy ender, son!.. vs. When you’re getting over ya girl, i’ll confess if you save me the bitchin’ That i’ve also been getting over her…… into some crazy positions ..the concept was creative, but i didn't really like the punch.. Fuck ya lazy writtens, when it comes to pimpin, ima make her do me When I go after a chick, ima 'get shorty' like that Schwarzenegger movie ..wrong movie man. but cool idea.. Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop. The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop ..lolz. illz fam! kind'a puts a picture in my brain.. I’m telling ya b, girls love to go down and put their melon on me Until I hit them with that sticky icky like I was sellin ‘em weed ..hmm, i like it but i dunno. ah, nvm. it was cool.. How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on ..maybe, but aren't u supposed be talkin bout bein a mack?.. But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim ..oh! this is funny, but yet again.. not really feelin. nawmeanz?.. I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail ..lolz. this was funny. wish u had more punches like this.. They’re easy as hell, when it comes to my girls, watch how the whore handles When i’m getting my knob slobbed like there was saliva on my door handle ..lolz, this was witty. if ya would'a taken more time wit it, it would'a been totally ILLZ.. My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car ..cool. a lil plain, but it was effective.. Ya heard me? In this mack battle, how the fuck you gon' murk me When I make bitches gobble gobble like a fucking turkey? ..naw! this was lame, yo.. Don't jerk me, i'm on that pimp shit, a dick is what a hoe gettin Cuz I dominatetrix And I also happen to know that's your moms pro-fession ..DOPE wordplay. i haven't seen it. niceness here.. No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic ..naw! too weak. maybe wit better wordin, but too plain here.. I'll screw up a skirt, pound that shit till she's screwed up n' hurt Only time Spul sweeps a bitch off her feet is when he screws up at work! ..NO! play'd to high hell and u should know this.. You're murked, so when I see a bitch walking, ima hop on-her And hit her with more white lines then the single file ones at the start of a heavy metal con-cert ..maybe! the creativity was there, but not too effective.. DAMN! this was a good battle, but overall i felt Spul dominated it quite easily. i know for a fact this wasn't Jack's best drop. he did pretty good, but for some reason didn't try as hard as could. still, Spul had a lot of good lines in his battle. he was consistant and a bit more creative wit punches. Jack, u had the cocepts, but the wordin was off on a lot of them. still, u did ur thing wit a pretty good verse man. dope battle guyz. v/ Spul |
Man, can I atleast edit the line where I put the wrond movie? Lmao.
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^do it. i'm out tho. thanks for vote untold. but yea, go ahead
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uppin..........
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the fuck, we got the most views by like double the second most views. and got the fewest votes? BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO vote mu fuckas!! stop reading only :mad: :shoot:
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Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big
I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line She like dominoes.. .. she'll go down one at a time! You know I'm lovin' this dime, cuz she a damn good rider man Makin' me spray out that stringy stuff, like I was spiderman Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick Who kept my name in her mouth all night... ... I guess she mistook me for a Dick vs. When you’re getting over ya girl, i’ll confess if you save me the bitchin’ That i’ve also been getting over her…… into some crazy positions Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop. The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop I’m telling ya b, girls love to go down and put their melon on me Until I hit them with that sticky icky like I was sellin ‘em weed How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car Ya heard me? In this mack battle, how the fuck you gon' murk me When I make bitches gobble gobble like a fucking turkey? No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic I think JTR got this pretty easily. From Spul I really liked the maybe/yes/no ratio, that shit was funny. Hanibal and dominoes lines were also pretty good. Rest of ya verse was decent, but inconsistent at times. JTR didn't have many lines at all which I felt missed. My fav was the plywood line, that was really witty, I laughed at that shit. The bust lines and tv shit was really witty as well. Nice battle here, well worth the read. Vote - JTR |
^word so what's that 1-1 or 2-1? i'm coo with either. uppin' for more votes!
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yo...
Your girls a slut. No lie, I mean it guy She known for takin' in a foot.. .. and I ain't talkin' bout penis size! Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period I'm a master in this pimp shit. Wooing the dames I pull so many tricks... ... that I put Houdini to shame Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio ^LMAO Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick Who kept my name in her mouth all night... ... I guess she mistook me for a Dick vs Fuck ya lazy writtens, when it comes to pimpin, I got hoes 'ta do me When I go after a chick, ima 'get shorty' like that Travolta movie Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop. The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail They’re easy as hell, when it comes to my girls, watch how the whore handles When i’m getting my knob slobbed like there was saliva on my door handle My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car I'll screw up a skirt, pound that shit till she's screwed up n' hurt Only time Spul sweeps a bitch off her feet is when he screws up at work! ^LOL v/ SPuL |
Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease
She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line She like dominoes.. .. she'll go down one at a time! But enough of that bitch, with chicks, I'm upright and center And nah, I ain't a bum<-- that's just where I'm gon enter No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period Ladies fall to my feet, I got their hearts and I can bet.. The way everyone digging this mac... .. Microsoft's starting to sweat I'ma pimp, while you a homo, son. We all know that's a fact I ram the pussy till they need first aids<-- while that's what you'll contract vs But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic You're murked, so when I see a bitch walking, ima hop on-her And hit her with more white lines then the single file ones at the start of a heavy metal con-cert Got damn this was a long as fuckin battle but after reading it twice.. ima have 2 go with spul..he came jus a lil harder here jack could of took this with a couple more quotes..but its jus like he was comin soft @ times v/spul |
3-2 Spul. Upping....
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SPuL wins 3-1.
SPuL wins. |
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